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  • Lionhearte

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    THE FEELS ;-;
    July 4th, 2014 at 08:50am
  • madamUnco87

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    Ooh nooooo :( :( :(

    What is to become of them????? Please post again soon, if you can

    Thanks for taking the time to update :)
    July 2nd, 2014 at 02:20am
  • onlyme_1998

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    Im so happy you are writing this again I missed this story so much and I have grown to lovr and cherish Charlotte and anderson. Your story actually help inspite the story im writing. Thank you for writing again.
    love, Gem
    February 25th, 2014 at 03:12am
  • madamUnco87

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    Yay!!!! You're back....I've missed Charlotte and Anderson :)

    Poor Anderson :( I hope things don't get worse.

    Can't wait for the next update :)
    February 24th, 2014 at 07:00am
  • clarklc

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    Well, while I feel sad that there isn't a new story I hope you have success with the other one you're working on. Good luck and I shall await patiently for inspiration to strike.
    November 30th, 2013 at 09:58pm
  • angelxx141

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    please update soon! this is really good! and i really love the story line.
    November 28th, 2013 at 02:57pm
  • simply me

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    Please update as fast as you can. You're super talented keep up the great work.
    November 10th, 2013 at 07:03pm
  • ohnana.

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    @ squidgyyo
    I STARTED SCREAMING NO TOO!!!! update now!
    November 7th, 2013 at 10:12pm
  • ohnana.

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    great story!!! I even teared up a little bit and I'm only on chapter 16.

    but when Charlotte was texting Sullivan and he replied super fast and she said "Dang...", I CACKLED!!!! Sullivan is thirstyyyyyyy!!! :) :) :) :) LMAOOOOO!
    November 7th, 2013 at 08:07pm
  • clarklc

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    I LOVE THE story and cannot wait until the next installment. Keep writing, you`'re great!
    November 5th, 2013 at 12:55am
  • heythere_lily

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    STAHHHHPPPPP! You can't! Please noooooo! Ugh I'm crying nooo!!! I love then tooo muccchhh
    November 4th, 2013 at 07:50am
  • squidgyyo

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    NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO WHY WOULD YOU END IT LIKE THIS?!

    Update asap
    November 4th, 2013 at 07:14am
  • loveylove

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    yay!! i cant wait to read it!
    October 26th, 2013 at 02:15am
  • loveylove

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    update soon love this story!!
    October 4th, 2013 at 02:51am
  • Kiana_Katastrophe

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    @ onlyme_1998
    Thank you! :D I hope to update another chapter soon(:
    September 12th, 2013 at 01:00am
  • Kiana_Katastrophe

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    @ MaggAims2Live
    you didnt come off as rude, dont worry xD I am nit picky when I read other people's stories but not my own cus I dont have time to proofread it, lol. I'll fix the names, thank you!(:
    September 12th, 2013 at 12:57am
  • onlyme_1998

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    Yay! An update:) I love how they have the matching beanies, so cute! Also I love the idea of their family growing closer together and seeing the past things they did that they are doing again!:) great job, please keep writting and updating
    September 11th, 2013 at 10:52pm
  • MaggAims2Live

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    Oops , it was chapter 5, not 3!
    September 11th, 2013 at 10:06pm
  • MaggAims2Live

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    No problem at all! I hope I didn't come off as rude. I do things like that all the time in my writing! Also, sorry to be so nit-picky, but I noticed you switched back and forth between the name "Sullivan" and "Benjamin" for the guy at that party in chapter 3, so I just thought I'd let you know! I really like this story, though.
    September 11th, 2013 at 10:04pm
  • Kiana_Katastrophe

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    @ MaggAims2Live
    thanks for letting me know i made an error(: i fixed it. It says now that the two have never talked but have always fought and argued rather
    Hopefully that fixes the confusion (:
    September 11th, 2013 at 09:34pm
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