This idea really is pretty awesome. The idea of evil having a 'pull' that affects only certain people really is quite a unique idea and the fact that it causes Joey such conflict even within the first chapter is really interesting. I'd love to hear about the internal struggles he has between good and evil because it sounds as if it'll make for an amazing story. I'm not 100% familiar with the Titans, but you're describing the characters well enough that I feel I could read on without having any prior knowledge anyway, which is awesome.
Your writing itself is pretty good too. Everything flows well and you've added a lot of emotion into certain parts of the chapter (especially the part regarding Joey and his father) which really does shine through when I'm reading. I definitely think you're doing a good job with this so well. Keep up the good work!
I like this piece. It is quite interesting, and something I haven't read before. For that I will definitely subscribe:) Keep it up, even if it isn't your best work you will still be better for writing it
Your writing itself is pretty good too. Everything flows well and you've added a lot of emotion into certain parts of the chapter (especially the part regarding Joey and his father) which really does shine through when I'm reading. I definitely think you're doing a good job with this so well. Keep up the good work!