As The Line Begins To Blur - Comments

Yes yes the spacing was fine :)
One more comment if I may; when you write the title of a song or a person's name just make it capital (I know you know it's just easier to read). This gets more and more interesting lol WINGS?!

@ redRevenge
O okay cool :)

@ bxgurl95
Yeah 'twas I added the new chapter then took it down cause I didn't think the ending was good enough will be up tomorrow :) about 10 hours

Ithought this chapter (chapter 5) was already written

@ bxgurl95
Sure thing :)

@ bxgurl95
England :) cause that's where I am

also the title is just brilliant

This story is so interesting, always keeps me on my toes not sure what to expect next; I also wasn't sure what the story was even going to be like.
Just for the sake of ease of reading, can you double space before you put up a new chapter (if that's not too much trouble) I can't wait for another update

just a question, where were they before she went to Cali?

@ amour-propre.
Thank you :) ps I have no idea where this is going!!

Don't be paranoid that your story isn't liked! I absolutely adore this story! I can't wait for more <3