Flowers of Winter - Comments

I love this so much. Your writing is so graceful and elegant. And you just make everything flow so well. And I love how we learn more and more about your characters and their love for each other in every chapter.

I would suggest that you pay attention to your punctuation when it comes to dialogue, though. Please don't be offended.

I really do think that you do a beautiful job conveying your characters and the harsh reality that Rue has to face.

Amazing job!

Oh man. This is so tragic and yet beautiful at the same time. I was like, mind blown, finding out that he was dead this whole time (it also cleared up the confusion over the pregnancy tests). Poor Roo. This makes me so sad but you wrote it so well. This is amazing :)

I'm tearing up for Roo! WHY OH WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE? :(

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I just... the writing in this is just so beautiful and simple, yet the story is so heartbreaking. I absolutely adore this. I love the way it's written, and the short chapters break it up nicely. You just do such a great job of portraying Roo's emotions throughout this. I can feel her longing and her sadness. This is a fantastic piece and I look forward to reading more!

You're writing is gorgeous. The details that were given were absolutely poetic and in tone with the mood of the story. I love how you have constantly made Roo perfectly detailed in her personality but not in her physical attributes. I mean, I get to learn about Roo more and more after every chapter.

I love it, absolutely and I can't believe Mibbians don't see a true writing talent like you have.

I keep wondering if he is dead, or she's schizophrenic and is imagining everything when she's locked in a mental asylum. Please update soon! This is addicting, and your writing is flawless.

This is so cute and simple so far. I feel like something deeper is going on, though.