God I just want to hold both of them and tell that it'll be okay! I also agree with the person below me, on why the broke up? I mean it's just this one big mastery on why this adorable loving couple are so heartbroken. I personally think you should do a Niall tagedy series thing. Normally I would say Harry because he can be sensitive but the more I think about it the more I think that having Niall, who no offense to Harry, seems more I don't know teenage guyish? So seeing Niall upset I think would add to the effect of the hwole tragedy. But that's my personal opinion, but of course ether one of them would make a good tragic story! Update soon!
I'm just dying to know what the fuck happened that made them break up. Especially since they seem so sweet together and they were both completely broken by the break-up.
YOU KEEP GOIN' GIRL! I wanna know what happened! I like the way write, your descriptions are vivid and well done. I wish your chapters were longer so I got to read more of your writing at once!