Archery - Comments

This was so so so adorable. I've never really read a Disney fan fiction, but I'm so glad Comment Swap brought me here. I absolutely adored the movie Brave and I think you did it great justice in this story. It was cute to see how the relationship between Merida and Elinor could be fixed, and I could picture this so clearly in my mind. I really, really enjoyed this. Great job :)

Holy mother of God, this story really blew me away. Looking at the title, I was like, eh, but this was an incredible read. First of all, I have never seen a Brave fanfiction on here and I just loved it. Brave was a fabulous movie and I love Disney to death.

Your writing took my breath away (or in a sense, not literally, I would hope) and I found myself eating the story up. You created such a wonderful story with the Brave characters and it was perfect. The descriptions were crisp and flawless, the word choice, the plot....wow.

I really loved this. The only thing was the text wasn't quite centered with the layout but that's just a whatever thing. Wonderful job with this. :)

It meant the word to Merida that Elinor was out here with her.
I think that word should be world.

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I have been meaning to read and comment on this one-shot ever since you posted it, but just never got around to it. But I am very happy that I have taken the time to actually sit down to read this.

I instantly fell in love with this one-shot even before I started reading it. I really love Brave and was just super happy to find a story about it. Bonus points having it take place after the movie and adding some information about what happened in the movie within the story. As I was reading, my love for this grew. You did a wonderful job with writing the characters exactly how they were portrayed in the movie, and I loved the interactions between Merida and Elinor. This one-shot was just so adorable!