Parks - Comments

serendipity cake. (105)

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Why are your words so pretty?

November 29th, 2012 at 08:02pm

What... (1400)

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“Okay then,” Jeremy says and Parks’ eyes widen, face cracking into the biggest smile Jeremy has ever seen on him

You did write fluff! I'm so proud of you!

And it just makes me feel all warm inside and.... I JUST DON'T EVEN KNOW!

November 25th, 2012 at 10:25am

Fandango (775)

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Parks is just a bit odd.

OMG HOW CUTE IS THE NAME PARKER /ahem.

“Are you inviting me over?” Jeremy asks with a smirk. Oooh suggestive

This is so unbelievably cute I can't even.

“Well, I’m not moving out anytime soon.”

“You’re asking me to move in with you?” GAH. WHY IS THIS GIVING ME ALL THE FEELS IN THE WORLD.

I love that Parks is older

I don't know why. Just adds depth to his character (idek, stop me from spewing rubbish at any time). The whole back story is just ngf. You add little details so easily, and it doesn't ruin the flow of the story. (I don't know why I'm saying, okay. Just. I love it.)

I can never find the words with you, gurl! JUST WRITE MORE OKAY. ALL THE TIME.

(I take responsibility for the fluff

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November 25th, 2012 at 08:28am