Margin of Victory - Comments

Wut?

Where's her father? Why is her house trashed? And what is Parker doing on her doorstep that late at night?

Sorry this is a short, crappy comment. I'm half asleep, but I couldn't not read once I saw that there had been an update.

Parker is so cocky, and usually that would irritate the hell out of me, but now it just makes me laugh! XD Poor Sage. She's just never going to get away from him, is she?

I hear you on the school thing. November is crazy busy for me too, and I don't even have exams! Just assignment after assignment. Which reminds me I have one due tomorrow, and I need to finish it.

Loved the update, as always! And I love that you're already thinking about re-writing this. =) It just goes to show how dedicated you are to this story, and how serious you are about it.

Please please please update

Aw, I missed this so much! I have a secret passion for this kind of stories, but I’m yet to find some on mibba that make me wish for more. You’re the only one here I trust 200% to write it in a way that’ll make me love it from beginning to end. You updating this makes me so happy; I think I’m too emotionally involved with this story already. Thanks for updating <3

Parker confuses me to no end. Even in his pov’s I can’t quite understand who exactly he is, much less when we’re seeing him through Sage’s mind, and that makes me nervous just as much as it makes me excited to see more into him. That part when he sees Sage’s bruise, he seemed concerned for a moment and then resorted to his cocky self in seconds. I’m yet to figure out if that was involuntary or not.

Loved the banter between them, though. I’m absolutely in love with the stage they are in, I almost don’t want it to change. Almost... who am I kidding? I’m on my toes waiting to see where this is going. :D

Honestly, truly loved the update. I don’t think I could ever not love something written by you, to be honest. But do what makes you happy with your chapters; I’ll wait how long it takes. This story is precious <3

You don't understand how excited I got over just the fact that you updated this!!
Love the banter between Sage and Parker

Sports have never interested me and I don't even know what a pep rally is, but the dialogue between Sage and Parker was interesting. XD It's been way too long since you updated this!

Bridgeport is a real town? It made me think of the Sims. =P

I know what you mean about wanting to re-write, too. I hope you decide what you want to do soon. =)

Sorry for the crappy comment. But I want to get to the other update. ;)

I love this story, thanks for updating!:)

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I LOVE YOU SO MUCH TODAY!!!!!!!!!!!
awesome update :-)

Update again soon please!

So happy you updated your stories, I really like this story hope you can continue updating!

ALSO you should update this story :-) PLEASe

Maye a new chapter? please

Fascinating, keep going!

«but the suicide comment I didn’t take lightly. Not as someone who’s contemplated it before.» for some reason this made my chest tighten. It makes me so curious to see deeper into Parker, the things he thinks about when he’s not focusing on being a dick. That thing with his father is a start, I guess. That must have been horrible, not only kind of witnessing it but especially making the decision to walk away. I wouldn’t be able to do it.

I don’t know what to think about Parker, honestly. There are little hints that he might feel bad for acting the way he does, but he generally just gives off that idiot vibe. What’s really going on inside that pretty head of his?

Well, I love this. It’s always such a pleasure to read your work. I just wish there was more. :( But I don’t mind waiting for it. I adore the way you’re going with this story, how you make it captivating and how you always leave me wondering. That’s amazing! Keep up the gorgeous work, love. :)

(And update soon)

It was definitely interesting to see things from Parker's point of view. I didn't expect the part about him going home and catching his father, either! The poor guy. =(

Mm, don't know what else to say. I'm tired, as I always seem to be these days. =( But this was a fantastic chapter! I saw the email for it this morning and have been waiting to get home all day so I could read it!

And as always, you do not disappoint. ;)

Great chapter
Can't wait sees what's next :)
Does he know sage and pepper is his brothers best friends?

loved this update :-) as always!

Loved the update! Can't wait for more!

What is this?! Brilliance, Brilliance!
This is so good! I can’t seem to ever get over how great of a writer you are, wow.

My favorite part must have been this one: «He shrugged. “What has 142 teeth and holds back The Incredible Hulk?”/ “I’m sure you’re going to tell me anyways.” / Parker’s grin practically lit up the room. “My zipper.”» OMG, hahahaha. I literally laughed out loud at this. Parker is so stupid. xD But he totally owns!

I like Aiden. :) And I still dislike Pepper greatly… how can someone be so idiotic? I mean, being mad at Sage for so long because of such a stupid, petty thing? That’s not something someone with character would do, in my opinion at least.

And there you had to go again and leave me here wondering what the hell is going on… I don’t know what bothers me the most, if Parker being, decidedly, using Pepper or if the fact that Pepper is so freaking dumb she would obviously fall for it. How is it possible?! D’:

You’re amazing! Amazing, amazing!! Everything about this is so fantastic and captivating and just wow. I can’t even… gah!

I love this like you wouldn’t believe! And your writing gets better every time… it almost seems impossible. How the hell do you do this?

I want more soon! Update. :D

I know CPR, if I’ve taken your breath away - I literally Snorted. I dont know why i find that one so funny. Loved the update! Cant wait for more.