No Excuses - Comments

Love it, this was a beautiful story I love the epilogue and tcahltwr 8 those were great chapters :)

Soo cute, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

@ jazter
I know been a little distracted with other stuff. Will work on my fuck-ton of commas. ;)

I really want to like your writing but you really, really need a beta reader. You need a fuck-ton of commas and other punctuation plus some overall tightening and structure work. Your writing is really choppy and the short sentences and paragraphs make it hard to grab the reader's attention. I know you're trying to crank your writing out as fast as possible but the quality almost always suffers when a writer does that.

Max u fucking idiot, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

@ KingHankie
Oh ok whew scared me a little

@ MoMo_92
I don't think it will be a true triangle just a really close friendship between her and Danny that has the potential to become something else. She wants Max and that is clear, but if Max makes it a triangle then so be it!

I don't want a triangle between Danny and Max becuz tht would mean tht Raven would have to decide and on top of tht she has a kid so she also has to think about what's right for him as well it would have been different if she didnt have Sam becuz thn by all means do a triangle but she has a kid so no triangle becuz if Sam gets hurt by either of those men thn it would be unfair advantage becuz if she chooses the wrong one thn she is goin to regret tht so yea please no triangle, oh and Raven I want u to understand tht questioning a hockey player y he is at the ice rink when he isn't suppose to be there becuz u brought ur child at the same ice rink was a stupid question becuz Max practices there so in way u r not suppose to be there at the ice rink with Sam especially if u wasnt ready for Max to meet him I mean u knew tht if u r with Danny and he invites u to go ice skating with him and his kids and bring Sam with u to be prepared to see the his players at the same ice rink as well including seeing Max just saying not trying to be rude or a bitch just giving u an understanding is all, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love the story! can't what to see what happens next!

For the love of GOD and all that is HOLY (TINY POCKETS!!) let there be a triangle! Swoon!!! ;)

First comment!!!! Love this story already, is Max ready to be faithful to Raven, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)