The Undead Linda Vista Visit - Comments

@ MoMo_92
No prob. :}

@ SaaviMafia
Thanks :)

@ MoMo_92
Thanks! Lve your profile pic by the way! >;}

I love this story, I thought it was cute and scary ass shit :)

Thanks. I didn't mean for the story to be so long, but I'm glad I finished it. Although I wish the ending would have turned out differently for Maria. I felt SO bad for her. But who knows, maybe someday she'll be able to ditch that awfull hospital. I think I might write a story about her... *hint hint wink wink* This was my first completed story, but I've got SO MANY IDEAS floating around in my head, so I might end up putting them up on MIBBA someday... Someday. Again, thanks for reading! I hope you do read the next one. It's gonna get spicy!(Get ready to get all hot and bothered!>;}

I loved this story. and so happy Maria was a good ghost. wonderful ending. And was this really your first story. it was so wonderful. I will be reading the next.

Def.

Thank you!!!!!!! It's greatly appreciated! What would the card say.... hmmmmm... good question...
"Merry Christmas from Hollywood's finest fuck buddies!"
Somewhere along those lines.

NOoo Don't stop. This is such a wonderful story. and what would said christmas card from jordan and george say?

First comment: Yeah, and he sounds VERY Mexican.
Second Comment: Read and you'll find out...
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I'M SO EVIL!!!!!!!!!

I knew those sneaky boys had a plan. but uhhh who played the scary bitch as she was often referred to.

When I first started liking them Funnyman was the only one that I could tell when he was singing. cause he is the only one with a really deep voice.

Same here. They all have distinctive voices, all very sexy.

I can't remember which song It was I first heard. its been a long time. But I fell in love. gotten to the point where I can tell who is who just off of voice.

They are! I fell in love with them after I heard "California". They've been my favorite band since.

I adore all the members. They are an awesome group.

@ TheFerret
Yeah. I actually hate it when people talk about "who's better? Deuce or Danny?" I'm glad we both see eye to eye on that situation. I like Charlie to, but all the membes are cool. When I first got into Hollywood Undead, I LOVED Johnny 3 Tears. But now's its dwindeled down. There just an awesome and f'n hilarious group.

I Love the lyrics and danny and duce are both great singers. Carlie is my fave though cause something about him is funny.

@ TheFerret
Thank you so much! I'm a big fan to. I'm tryingto make the story as interesting as possible. Again, thank you for reading!

This is the first story I have ever actually fallowed. I am loving it. I am a big HU fan.