Flawed Wings and Desperation - Comments

First of all, the background isn't compatible with the text.
Second, you have this creative mind but you're not really maximizing it. (You'll know a good writer when you read his/her story.)
Third, there are some grammatical errors.
Fourth, continue to write! :)

@ XxBlackHeartAngelxX
It probably was! I didn't even think to check! I just highlighted the text! Sometimes I just don't think! Haha!
Well i'll definitely check out your other work!

@ xXLoveForEternityXx
thanks for the tip! i'm glad you enjoyed it enough to want more, but I think it really ends there, since there's no backstory or real plot involved... =P =)
as for the writing, I'll check it out - just checking (really stupid question, but humour me) are you sure it was using the custom layout? because there's no white background there =/ i hope its loading for everyone else... >.>

Quite interesting to read! I would have liked if there was more!

Though I do have a suggestion! The writing was too light, you can't read it against the white background! Maybe make it a bit darker??