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  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I love this so much <3 please update soon :)
    September 9th, 2013 at 11:25am
  • Prison Riot

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    So glad this has been updated <3
    September 8th, 2013 at 05:31pm
  • Forgotten Memory.

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    @ lauzzdestroya
    Thanks :)
    September 8th, 2013 at 04:28pm
  • nightcrawler_

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    @ Forgotten Memory.
    Of course I understand, and I'm happy and grateful that somewhere you're finding the strength to read this despite your past, which I'm sorry to hear about. Take your time.
    September 8th, 2013 at 10:23am
  • Forgotten Memory.

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    Ive just stumbled upon your story, and its really good. But i am going to have to read it slowly. I want to get through it, i hope it has a happy ending, but its hard for me because as a kid i watched my mom be a victim by my drinking father. So yeah, but it is well written and flows good, just difficult for me. Hope you understand.
    September 8th, 2013 at 07:59am
  • Catiel

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    @ lauzzdestroya
    Ah, I see, that makes me really happy to hear c:
    August 28th, 2013 at 06:22am
  • nightcrawler_

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    @ Blue Paint
    Don't worry, the story hasn't stopped. Especially recently I do most of the writing for this and 'Baby Mine', and I've been at work an awful lot lately so I haven't got round to completing the next chapter yet. Bit I promise I haven't forgotten about this and there will be an update ASAP, so please hang in there. :)
    August 27th, 2013 at 11:42am
  • Catiel

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    To me it just seems that a lot of stories have just stopped for no reason, maybe its summer vacation, maybe everyone died, who knows, but I really love this story and I was wondering when you'll be able to finish it? You don't have to rush or anything but it'd be a shame to loose this story after seeing it start and following it through until now.
    August 27th, 2013 at 06:49am
  • nightcrawler_

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    @ x_Demolitione
    Oh christ
    April 10th, 2013 at 07:22am
  • x_Demolitione

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    I especially love the part where we messed with all of your emotions. <3

    Dear readers: I am in love with all of you, your comments make me happy.

    Dear Lauzz: I hope you thought this was an actual comment. Also O-P-Dinner is up.

    xoMegan
    April 10th, 2013 at 12:43am
  • Prison Riot

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    If Gerard dies I will actually cry. You kind of start screaming for him to just punch Frank in the face and run or something, but then you remember how happy they were right at the start and how they'd known each other since Gerard was 8 and ugh basically this is just written so well and the plot just flows and yeah <3 xx
    April 2nd, 2013 at 06:32pm
  • Corrupt_Perfection

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    I feel like a terrible person. This chapter is so horrifying and chaotic, but it is exciting and brilliant. I realize that I shouldn't have been hoping for it to play out like that, but, allow me to be honest for a second, I wanted the terror-filled, suspenseful, viscious drama that just occurred. I am glad Gerard is still alive, luckily I wasn't hoping for his death, but it creates more anticipation by leaving him in this critical state, drawing out the emotions. Sorry, I just realized how ridiculous I seem, I just babbled on. On that note, the story is wonderful, I can't wait until the next update, and I hope you two enjoy your week together.
    April 2nd, 2013 at 08:32am
  • OwlHooots

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    Fucking hell!!!!

    Cheating is not ok, I totally get that, but in this situation you cannot fucking blame Gerard one bit. If he tries to leave Frank, he gets hurt, so when he wants to feel a little safe love with no pain, where is he supposed to go? It's SAD to think that he had to go to a stranger for that instead of the man he thinks he loves and who's supposed to love him.

    What Frank was saying to Gerard while beating him really fucking got to me. Like...he hasn't learned anything at all. He feels no remorse because he still really fucking believes that the things he does are justified. He only feels remorse when he feels as though he crossed the line, but as soon as Gerard can stand up again, he doesn't hesitate to knock him down. I don't know what's in store for them after this, but you guys have me on the edge of my fucking seat!!!!

    Love you both <3
    April 2nd, 2013 at 07:03am
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I love this <3 please update soon :)

    I don't think that Gerard deserved any of that, but I also kinda feel sorry for Frank because as much as he loves Gerard, he can't stop himself from hurting him :/
    April 2nd, 2013 at 05:38am
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    Love it! <3 please update soon :)
    Fuck...
    April 1st, 2013 at 02:51am
  • OwlHooots

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    Can you feel that? The two of you since you're together? It's me glaring at you s until you feel the need to just NOT LEAVE ME WITH A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT. MY GLARES CAN DO THAT OK!
    But damn this chapter. I cannot wait to see what happens next and I'm kind of holding out hope for the possibility that Frank won't be a complete asshole? But...who knows with you evil little authors *still glaring* I just hope Gerard will be ok
    April 1st, 2013 at 01:56am
  • xofrnkiero

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    update soon pleassee:)
    March 31st, 2013 at 10:44pm
  • Prison Riot

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    This story is just so brilliant and you two are just such great writers, wow <3 xx
    March 31st, 2013 at 10:32pm
  • OwlHooots

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    This makes me sad :( But I completely understand. So both of you take allll the time you need, I--and many others--willll be waiting! <333
    March 19th, 2013 at 04:23am
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I love this story and hope you can update it soon :)
    <3
    March 18th, 2013 at 01:47am