Sadly I feel he deserved what he got. People like him deserve to be zombie chow lol. It's good she has other people to be with and not on her own. Still this would be a horrible situation to find ones self in. Absolutely love it so far and I can't wait to see where this leads
Hey, I think this has a lot of potential. The only problem I can see at the moment is it’s in desperate need of a layout (they really draw people in and a lot of people won’t read a story without one), and a few minor edits. Mostly just the way it’s formatted and a few spelling mistakes. I can help you with both if you’d like. Otherwise the story seems great so far.
I really like the idea behind this. The plot is awesome! I think it needs some editing, though. But I would definitely encourage you to continue with this. I'd like to see how it unfolds. AND...I have to say that I don't blame her for leaving him to that monster. He deserved it!