Pixie Dust - Comments

Love it. Very interesting read! Thanks for writing :)

THE ENDING I don't even care, you're writing me a proposal follow-up
nice British boy. An oxymoron if there ever was one. I lost focus for a second and when I tried to find the bit I'd been reading I skipped and read the 'he jumped' and because of the context that was before it I FREAKED OUT.
But, all that aside, I enjoyed this so much. And I think that how you write scared/broken!Ryan is absolutely adorable.
Bravo.

I don't even know either, why is this perfect?!

I don't even know right now because, just. You. You are amazing. And this is amazing. And the feels. I just...

I didn't want to blab on about imagery and metaphors and how you captured Ryan perfectly (OMG), but I just... When Ryan doubts Brendon and his relationship I wanted... idek. To make Brendon come back and love him and them to be happy forever because he deserves it. I love how you made me genuinely scared and upset for Ryan, and him imagining falling and the pixie dust and the thing with the birds and... everything. So, so unbelievably clever and poignant and my HEART. It's in my throat because this is just so deliciously beautiful and sad and then just perfect at the end.

I was actually anticipating Brendon calling, but your idea is totally better an unexpected. But totally better. AND THE LAST LINE. DEAR LORD. I CAN'T RIGHT NOW BECAUSE WOW. I love scenes like that

(I'll stop now )