@ E P Kent Thanks For Commenting. I Agree That It Wasn't All That Great.. Lol.. And You're Not An Asshole At All.. :) Just Being Honest And I Appreciate That... I'll Definitely Take What You Said To Heart And Work On It.. Thanks Again.. :)
Comment Swap: I really just couldnt get into this at all. The writiing is strained and the story hurts even more. One thing i really liked though was your blend of narrative and poetry; ive never read anything like that before and i thought it was awesome. An useful technique i use to polish my writing is to read the work out loud and a lot of the time words and sentences will float in as you speak; it also fixes grammer. This comment was awfully brash but its honest criticism; writing isnt about doing a good job, its about improving, something that never ends (not even stephen king). Never stop trying if you want to succeed, even when an asshole like me tears you down. keep working and all you can do is go up.
Thanks For Commenting. I Agree That It Wasn't All That Great.. Lol.. And You're Not An Asshole At All.. :) Just Being Honest And I Appreciate That... I'll Definitely Take What You Said To Heart And Work On It.. Thanks Again.. :)