@ I Love Adub Hehe, Zach will be Zach. I do that with my stories too, like I'm reading and I'm all "NO DON'T DO THAT!" or something that I'm like "Wait. This is my story, why am I saying this?" LOL, I guess if we like our stories that much, it'll happen. Let's hope Zach calls the cops soon, I'm kinda worried that she might die...
@ Skyscraper haha aww, that makes me really happy Eh, it's Zach, he's not quite that bright haha. What's really sad is when I read over to check for spelling and stuff and I'm just like "Zach do something! Wait, I know what happens."
So I was on the home page and I saw you had updated "two minutes ago" so I screamed and quickly clicked on it. Now I have to read it and I'll probley scream again
:O BUT I bet their plan isn't gonna work. I bet when Brooklyn doesn't show up and Zach sees Arial, and she tries to comfort him, I bet he's gonna know something's up and the bitches plan is runied and they go to jail. Am I right?