His Beautiful Prize - Comments

Guys i'm so sorry i haven't updated! I promise i will soon! I already typed it...i just can't remember which flash drive and or computer i saved the chapter onto..... :/ also lots of crap has been happening so again i apologize!!!

This is an absolutely amazing story, and it's just so original. You should definitely keep going, and update soon. :)

Oh wow. No wonder Ezra didn't do anything, that must really suck! I can't wait for the next update!

i have to say, i absolutely love reading this story... =) thanks or the update

verryyy interesting. so she wont choose to be with a man to give power to, she'll take the power for herself, her kind? and love whomever she ends up loving. idk. but interestingggg

I really just like Ezra, in all honesty...sigh* oh well it's not my decision...but I'm with Naveena, how about some more specific answers lol. I can't wait for the next update!!

Okay this is like, super twisty and not expected, I love itXD

ohman oh man ohmannnn the confusion of who she is gonna choose is gonna drive me insannneee!!! (although, if my vote coutns, ultimately i thin it should be ryder) he fell in love with her for her and knows her best it seems. Ezra has been tainted by the past and kaleb seems to be led my his own selfish desires. Love this story. Not at all what I was expecting, I love the loops you throw me through!

i agree with the previous comment!!!

I started reading this today, and what I thought was going to be a simple, not very original but maybe interesting story turned out to be amazing! I love the story and I am hooked. I can't wait for more =)

Wow okay so trying to read the dialogue was a little confusing but otherwise, great chapter! I really love Ezra so to me everyone else just needs to go away. Including Kaleb, and I don't understand where these feelings for Ryder are coming from! I think Ezra may have missed the old Naveena in the beginning, but I think he really loves her for who she is. Update again soon please!

This was great!! I wanna read more!! & let's get rid of that writer's block please! Lol :)

Thank you! :) working on th next chapter now! :D

Think this was the best chapter so far :) Nice to get some more background!! Can't wait till the next one x

This story is fricking awesome! Confusing but.. God! O_O there are still parts that I don't understand completely but I think it's the secrets that have to yet be revealed.. This queen seems so fishy to me! Ôô so She tried to kill her own daughter? The hell..?! And what is it exactly that the chooser does... What's the power? What's with all the man after her? :s

I just found this story and haven't stopped reading it is amazing! I love it and cant wait for more!

Wow I am speechless! I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you started writing it already, lol!

& I hope you had a good one too! :) xx

I love this story so much. At first I was weary because it seemed like another vampire story, but oh my gosh it's so much more!

Also hope ya'll had the best Christmas or whatever holiday you celebrate! :) And i hope that you have an amazing new year!

Thank you for all your encouraging comments! I hope I don't dissapoint! This entire expirience is humbling!