Worth It - Comments

I really which this had a layout because I think that'd really add to the story if it did. Your summary though, it nearly had me in tears; 10th/Rose 5eva!

Don't get me wrong with this comment but, this story should have either been longer or had more of a filling. It just seems a little empty and ugh, there's just something missing.

I get that Jack's lecturing the Doctor about his feelings over Rose but, you could have just added so much more to this piece. The ending broke my heart though; are they or aren't they gonna get it on? I wanna know!

Maybe you should think about going back and changing it around; maybe a two shot or something? Great piece though; I'm having so many feels over it right now.

Hello to you! The Comment Swap thingy brought me here and now I've read this story, so here's my review:

This is far from the stories I normally read and since there is only one chapter I can't really make out that much from it, however I like the way you write. Especially the way you wrote the dialogues. It was casual, but had some fun things in as well and sarcasm- at least the way I read it. I love when it's like that in stories, it makes them seem so much more realistic and not as..."robotic" as others might be. So that's a huge plus with me! :) I wish you would have more chapters out and posted because it was quite entertaining to read and I wanted to see where this story is going. :)

The only thing I have to say is that I would personally loved a description. Or at least what it might be about, even if I did love the quote because it could go really well with the story. The only reason for the description, it would have shown what fan-dom this belonged it heheh :)

Otherwise, really good for the first chapter!

I love Rose/10th ship fics. I really look forward to more updates from you! This is really great, and well written.

Comment swap brought me here, and even though this isn't really the sort of story I read, this story seems to be shaping nicely. I like it so far, it is written well, and I can not see any mistakes or errors, which is good. The only criticism I can give is that there needs to be less dialogue and more description, but other than that, the story is good and sounds interesting. The dialogue is good, you just need more description to match it. Good job so far, keep up the good work! (: x x x

I like the quote in the summary. It drew me in. I know of Doctor Who and have seen like two episodes. I'll get into eventually. That being said, I'm confident that this will turn out to be an excellent story. But I do feel as though there could be more detail, the dialogue overcompensates. But good luck writing.