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  • idiedloved

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    aw Max sounds like a sweetheart :') update soon please
    November 29th, 2012 at 07:45pm
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    @ f0reverbr0ken
    thanks Smile yeah, i realised that i forgot spaces and put them in, thanks for telling me:3
    November 28th, 2012 at 08:19pm
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    @ Drowninginsurrealism
    thanks Smile
    November 28th, 2012 at 08:19pm
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    @ Of_Clumsy_Words
    thankyou:3 it means a lot Smile
    November 28th, 2012 at 08:18pm
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    Aww! I really just want to give Alex a hug! This is really well written and seriously can't wait to see how this turns out! Keep up the great work! :D
    November 28th, 2012 at 07:56pm
  • f0reverbr0ken

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    I like this.
    The only thing I would change is to put spaces between paragraphs cause it will be hard to read once you get into the longer chapters and such.
    November 27th, 2012 at 11:57pm
  • Drowninginsurrealism

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    Love it!!
    November 27th, 2012 at 10:43pm
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