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  • polka dot perfection

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    more!
    more!
    January 8th, 2013 at 03:29am
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    This is turning into quite the story love :) though you weren't exactly subtle with all the SHINee stuff in chapter 4 :P Just remember I know where you live, so I will make you post more if I have to. My favorite part was this though;

    "In the real world, you are nothing more than a forgetful actor who is forced to improvise the longest play in the history of time. Most people keep hold of the hope that one day they will find their lost script, but so far no one has succeeded."

    That was just pure genius babydoll. :)
    January 4th, 2013 at 04:47am
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    o.O
    who's the stranger! Who's the stranger!
    December 28th, 2012 at 11:44pm
  • polka dot perfection

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    Are 'hungry wovlves' hinting towards something?
    I'll just have to wait and see I guess:D
    Poor boy's in pain and she's not helping!
    December 9th, 2012 at 11:13pm
  • polka dot perfection

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    I adore the insight to what's he's feeling and how confused he is and how he's trying to piece things together the best way he knows how:D
    subbing and reccing now^.^
    December 9th, 2012 at 03:47am
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    I like viewing his side of the story - freaking love the name by the way and how he's like 'yeah, I'm American' and they're just like 'that means nothing, try again' lol
    December 9th, 2012 at 03:41am
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    *her, lol
    December 9th, 2012 at 03:29am
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    I'm going to go chapter by chapter since there's only three so far:D

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    I am really enjoying this so far. it gives some background to the character and a chance to view his life as well as the intro to the new boy who I am quite intrigued about. :D
    onto the next chapter!
    December 9th, 2012 at 03:27am
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