24 - Comments

I’ve just finished 23, and now I’m starting in on this bad boy! I’m fucking transfixed! I’ve always secretly hoped Izzy will end up with Gates *hearty eyes* Or that maybe, just maybe Vengeance has a softer, loving side Izzy will reveal in him. But I’m mostly on Team Gates! You’re writing is AMAZING! It’s absolutely sucks you right into their world. I can’t get enough!

And again with Izzy being choked with zero calm or self-defense. It's totally unfair that she has three guys from A7X wrapped around her oh-so-innocent, holier-than-thou chef finger (ch 14)

It still annoys the hell out of me that Izzy gave Matt such an unbelievable load of crap for fucking that brunette (who knows, maybe he's been screwing her for longer than he's known Izzy) and she gets off the hook with a week of guilt for stabbing Brian in the back with Vengeance, his best friend. Bloody. Hypocrite.

So much for those freaking self-defense classes (ch 8)

“Who would have thought that Vengeance had friends.” Snorted Izzy in spite of herself.

Lol. You already know my thoughts on the matter. I love it. And FOR GOODNESS' SAKE DID THOSE SELF DEFENSE LESSONS MEAN NOTHING?! HUH?! NOT A SINGLE PUNCH TO THE NOSE, EVER. NONE! WHAT THE HECK, MAN?!

AHHHH OMG THAT IS SO CUTE!!! BROMANCES ARE THE ULTIMATE UTTERLY SWEETEST THINGS EVERRRRRR and he called him ZACKY! AHHH how cuuuuute!!!!! *ch 22*

AHHHH OMG THAT IS SO CUTE!!! BROMANCES ARE THE ULTIMATE UTTERLY SWEETEST THINGS EVERRRRRR and he called him ZACKY! AHHH how cuuuuute!!!!! *ch 22*

AHHHH OMG THAT IS SO CUTE!!! BROMANCES ARE THE ULTIMATE UTTERLY SWEETEST THINGS EVERRRRRR and he called him ZACKY! AHHH how cuuuuute!!!!! *ch 22*

17- Where are the yummy nom noms?

13- “Maybe you should tell her that.” Muttered Shadows mulishly.

This just made me picture...a mule...with Shadow's face...sitting in a pouty dog-sit position...XD

7- THANK. GOODNESS. I am so happy with your character right now. I was berating/insulting another story's main Avenged character because she was so pathetic. This one can think, fight, AND control her emotions. YES!!! Kudos for you! And brownies!

4- You really like the word 'proverbial' don't you?

Best story ever!!! I really enjoyed it!!! I'm going to read the next installment!! Hoping its just as good!!

So I finally finished this story! Shew wee lady. I really didn't see those twists in the last two chapters coming. I will say that I want Izzy and Brian sex scenes already haha. Hopefully that is in 25.

@ shortygirl
Haiiiiii....so glad you came across my stories..and yes...chapter 1 of 25 is up as of today! Be sure to comment and subscribe..updates are weekly

Just finished reading 23 and 24. They are both amazing. Though I wish Night would just go jump off a cliff already. Will she ever be at peace? I was wondering if there will be a 25?

I just read both 23 and 24. Oh god I loved it. I need more. I neeeeeed moreeee.

Just finished 24 (and 23) and they were both EXCELLENTTT. Not only did you obliterate my romantic expectations practically the whole time (most stories are more straight forward) but I really appreciated the interjections of strategy in what all of your characters were doing. Some moments I wished Izzy had been smarter but it was understandable for her character. Have you read any Robert Greene?
Anyway, you had my heart racing by the end there. Did NOT expect the cliffhanger but I'm glad there's a possibility of another sequel at least.
Loved both of them, thank you for following through to the end and for not dragging it out for the sake of length.
Wonderful writing all around, good work C:

OMG PLEASE DO A 25! YOU CAN'T END IT LIKE THAT! AHHHHHHHHH!!

I just read 23 and this one :) I loooooooooved them :D I would really like another sequel :)