I Don't Need My Memory to Remember that Smile - Comments

thanks for commenting it means alot and my grammar sucks writing stories on my ipad is very difficult thanks for commenting

I don't know why there weren't any comments on this story. It's really good, I love the plot. You just need to work on grammar and putting question marks after questions (ex: “How many of those do you have in there.” Alek asked... - there should be a question mark after there, dangit! :P). I would love to read a prequel, if you ever decided to write one.