December 17th, 2012 at 12:45am
I must be insane for not commenting sooner, because this story is just so gorgeous oh my god.
I adore the title, and the little summary. "This is what happens when you leave Gotham City."
It's so intriguing, I just immediately want to click on the chapter and start reading.
I think I've fallen in love with La Sombra, she's so amazing and I cannot even form coherent sentences right now because I'm gushing over these chapters. I love strong characters so much, and the way she teases and taunts everyone is so fabulous. She's such a confident little lady ^_^ I love it. I'm also very curious to learn a little about her background, as she's always saying 'My people sent me' when people question her motives, and that's just so vague and mysterious.
Bane and The Joker working together is just a match made in heaven, too. Although Bane's getting a little frustrated.
I like the Chapter 6 a lot, although all of the chapters are fantastic, because Escarlatta's (Am I spelling that right?) conversation with Bane/Joker when she's tied up is just precious. :3 I also like Chapter 4 a lot, simply because of the description when Bane/Joker and wreaking havoc on the city :) It's got such lovely description:"Fire, debris, and the screaming was music to Joker’s ears. The scene was chaotic, and to Joker, it was a piece of art."
That excerpt just really stuck out to me. I love it.
Anywho, subscribed and recommended! This is brilliant.
I thank you for the lovely comment! We're both so happy that you like La Sombra, we really wanted her to show off a strong, fierce personality since she is being with such big personalities such as Bane, Joker, and Batman/Bruce. We're glad that you like her a lot! :3 I know for sure it makes me extremely happy. She's our baby haha!
Once again thank you for the comment, and I hope you continue to like the story!
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