Too Beautiful To Be So Broken - Comments, page 2

MrsBenjiMadden (100)

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Awwww! I love this story! It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside! If that makes any sense at all. o.0

June 11th, 2008 at 02:50pm

AnaSanders (100)

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wow i really like this story so far. I even stayed up till 1 in the morning to finish it even though i have to wake up at 6:30 for work. That's just how good it is! lol.

I like the way you describe Niki and the way Zacky feels about her. You make it seem real and i can really imagine her in my head. She's a good character.
=D

June 11th, 2008 at 08:14am

CemeteryGates6661 (100)

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awwwwww!!!!!!

thats so cute!!!!

they are too perfect!!!!

I love this story now i have to go update my own!!!

this should be fun!

anyways keep writing its good and who care if the chapter titles suck its the story that counts and the story dosen't suck at all!

June 11th, 2008 at 03:59am

tiffanydarlingxo (100)

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love it.

June 11th, 2008 at 03:35am

Hoodie.V (100)

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i love the update.
aw, i loved when Zacky got sad because their breakfast was getting rained on.
Lol. =]

June 11th, 2008 at 02:51am

XplagueXofXshadowsX (100)

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what a romancer :)
love the update and cant wait for more

June 11th, 2008 at 02:44am

astro.zombie.dee (100)

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awe that was so sweet of him

June 11th, 2008 at 02:26am

CemeteryGates6661 (100)

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awwwwww that was cute but what's gonna happen now?

June 10th, 2008 at 06:12am

astro.zombie.dee (100)

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great story!!

June 7th, 2008 at 07:21am

ProverbofHell (100)

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This story is absolutely awesome!
Good friendship, jealousy, retaliation, lies, deceit, love...and sex...what more could a great story need?
Awesome, hope that this was not the end and you're still sending updates?

June 5th, 2008 at 09:29am

XplagueXofXshadowsX (100)

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amazing as always!

June 3rd, 2008 at 02:17am

tiffanydarlingxo (100)

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loved it.

June 1st, 2008 at 11:30pm

almost.easy (100)

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loved it!!!
the sex scene was really good!!!:P

June 1st, 2008 at 09:24pm

Crystal.Clear (100)

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amaaaaazzzingggg!!!!!
more more moreee :)

May 30th, 2008 at 05:51pm

Kaytie.LOVES (100)

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woopwoop, i looovee this story :] its great so farr.

May 28th, 2008 at 12:59am

XplagueXofXshadowsX (100)

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thank god they're back together! i thought it would never happen :)
love the story so far

May 27th, 2008 at 05:13pm

Dan Moore (100)

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I just sat here and read your story. This an amazing story please update more soon.

May 27th, 2008 at 01:00am

Kelli Marie (100)

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omg! i love this story! write mo!! lol

May 27th, 2008 at 12:31am

forgottenfaerieX13 (100)

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i love your story
its m-a-zing

May 26th, 2008 at 09:19pm

MrsBenjiMadden (100)

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I love this story! And here, you get the 'I love this story' dance/song!

I LOVE THIS STORY, I, I, LOVE THIS STORY. I LOVE THIS STORY, I, I, LOVE THIS STORYYYYYYYYY! CHEA!

*Jazz hands/ Spirit fingers*

May 26th, 2008 at 05:47pm