Nothing but the Stars - Comments

@ BlueDreams
We shall see. Considering Nari is going to have a hard time coping and moving on. There is definitely going to be ups and downs from this

This is going to be a hard time for both Nari and Tom but let's see if they can bond and help her heal.

@ teenagedream91
It's good. It's a great character growth opportunity to be honest.

I am very excited to have found this story, can't wait to get to know them and see what happens in their lives!

@ BlueDreams
Thank you! I was half asleep when I wrote the first half lol yet it got the job done when I read it over again. I'm pretty happy about how this chapter turned out. Like you said, Tom is used to having Abel and Nari be his anchor now it's time for him to step up a bit

@ hachie
Thank you! I meant it for it to be heartbreaking and adding a little bit of denial and comfort before it came crashing down again. They did have a strong bond, Tom is going to be looking out for her more frequently than he has done before.

The first section of text was one of the saddest things you ever wrote sis and I congratulate you on that. Then I just loved to see Tom step up and realise that, for once, he has to be the protective one, the rock.

Oh man the way you were able to describe the pain Nari is going through got me to tear up! For to have that dream of her husband not being gone and there with her but then to have it ripped away when she wakes is just heart breaking. But Tom is there to be her anchor just like he said and help Nari just get through her days from the funeral. Those three really did have a strong bond and now Tom is keeping to his promise and looking out for Nari. I love this chapter despite it making me tear up! I look forward to the next update!

@ BlueDreams
Well some f my greatest ideas come out of the blue so crossing my fingers for that.

@ teenagedream91
I remember actually, that's why I'm curious haha

@ BlueDreams
Ah I see. Well it's kind of tradition. No one has to do it but someone usually does. I did talk to you about this story before. Don't have much plotted though lol

@ teenagedream91
I'm not sure about Portugal but I was just curious.
Two years? Well, I'm even more curious now haha

@ RosiePosie08
Thank you!

@ BlueDreams
I guess it's an American tradition? People speak up or give eulogies here for the deceased. I have one before, really heartbreaking and difficult. I can't give up my drama sis lol I love it too much. Thought I give this a go since it's been in my file for almost two years...yikes XD

I am already loving this!!!

I feel for Nari in ways that I can barely explain.
I wasn't aware of the fact that people could 'speak' up at funerals but poor Nari, that would be just too much to be honest.
And I'm already very excited about this. I can feel that it's going to be slightly dramatic but amazing, as always.

@ CharmedLuna
No it's not weird. I read stuff like that all the time. Thank you

Is it weird to say I like to read things that make me sad? It means you're doing an amazing job portraying emotions and that's actually hard to do in writing. I love it :)

@ hachie
Thank you! That is exactly right! It is like when Tom says goodbye to Abel and things of the past will start resurface of when Abel was alive and Tom's promise to him. They are the only two that truly understand Nari and her nature.

Holy Cow! I teared up from reading the first chapter! And seeing the gif of Tom on the summary is just seems like the moment he was saying his farewells to Abel! I felt my heart broke because it's clear that Abel truly understands Nari and it seems that Toms does to. I very much look forward to the next update! Awesome update!