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  • Grimm.

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    You should update asap. kay?
    December 29th, 2013 at 10:28am
  • noodleabibi

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    update please!!!! Mr. Green
    May 24th, 2013 at 04:48pm
  • noodleabibi

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    update please!!!! Mr. Green
    May 24th, 2013 at 04:48pm
  • synystergates__1001

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    This is really good .... can't wait to read more ....update soon please
    March 28th, 2013 at 07:52pm
  • Star Angel

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    update soon love this
    March 21st, 2013 at 01:28am
  • gothique4

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    Thank god that Matt showed up when he did. Now I'm all intrigued as to who the asshole's boss is.

    Oh gawd, after all of that he goes and turns into a leering lech lol
    March 18th, 2013 at 10:33am
  • Quoth Raven

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    I loved this update! It was so vivid! I like the banner also! I wonder who's trying to hurt Danielle? Update when you get the chance!
    March 17th, 2013 at 10:59pm
  • Felicity Smoak

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    I like this story so much and I also like the way you write. Update soon I can't wait to see what's going to happen and I hope they will find out who hurt Danielle! :)
    March 17th, 2013 at 05:44pm
  • Star Angel

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    love this but one thing you said that jimmy would not be in the story but he is in chapter 4 you say the rev laughed and what not just so you know and you introduced arin in chapter 2 so ya but i do love this please update soon
    March 6th, 2013 at 09:43am
  • queencho

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    Gahhhh! Cliffhangeri almost had a fucking heart attack please update soon!!!!
    February 5th, 2013 at 06:06am
  • SapphirexFlames

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    Love it! I wonder what Shadows is gonna do after he sees what happened to Danielle!
    January 31st, 2013 at 05:06pm
  • Moriarty;

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    I like it! What's Shadows going to do when he founds out some guy beat the crap out of her! Hopefully he's all sweet and takes her out of the apartment for good...
    January 31st, 2013 at 08:39am
  • kay192

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    This story is so good! I can't wait to read more of it. Please Update soon :)
    January 31st, 2013 at 07:56am
  • saint james.

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    Great update. I feel bad for Danielle that she got beat up in her own apartment. If only she had taken the ride from Shadows then possibly he could have saved her. I can not wait to read what happens next with Shadows and Danielle especially when she explains what happens to her to him. Please update soon!
    January 31st, 2013 at 04:14am
  • gothique4

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    oh my good poor Danielle :-( I hope that Shadpws and the guys find out who hurt her
    January 31st, 2013 at 03:13am
  • Issues

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    This story seems really interested so far. Please update soon. :)
    January 27th, 2013 at 10:26pm
  • BelovedSyn

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    I've been busy lately so I couldn't read but I finally did! I want more. That's all I'm gonna say.
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    Soon, please. Nice job!
    January 19th, 2013 at 03:53pm
  • Quoth Raven

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    Finally got the chance to read this! It's so awesome! I love this update, though I want to know what's going on with this girl...hmmm.
    January 19th, 2013 at 01:10am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    I think there was something fishy going on with her car, but I mean she just moved there so I doubt anyone has it out for her, but you did say someone ends up with bruises?? I need to know more!! Lol. I really like this! I love gangster shadows:D He's sexy as all hell!! I almost died when he was so forward with her.. Update soon please!
    January 17th, 2013 at 06:40pm
  • MarMarJones

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    I cant wait to read more of this story!
    January 17th, 2013 at 05:20am
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