July 6th, 2007 at 07:29pm
awwwwwwnes!!! and you're story isnt shitty its amazing!!!!
please tell me that wasnt the end....
xoxo
My Miserable Romance - Comments
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July 6th, 2007 at 07:23pm
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Yes...finally married! *comes out of silent lurking for a minute*July 6th, 2007 at 07:05pm
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awww that was so sweet and awesome and perfect
ur an awesome writerJuly 6th, 2007 at 06:56pm -
hey..
your storyy is fucking AWESOME i have been reading it for ages now!!!!
i wanna know what happpens at the sleepover! hhahaha.. i can imagine them sleeping over some ones house in the early years of the band ya know!! anyway... just commenting on peoples stories...
tis great... XD.. xJuly 6th, 2007 at 12:11am -
Yay, jag e ikapp! Weeeiiee!! Asbra btw!!July 4th, 2007 at 06:26pm
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awsome...
awwwwwwwwwwwww Frank is so cute, he got a tatto with gees name <3 Love!!!!
thanks for making the chapter extra long :D the next chapter is 100!!!!!July 3rd, 2007 at 10:23pm -
wooo hooo i love this story!!! and awwwwwwwwww the tattoo idea is so cute!July 3rd, 2007 at 03:29am
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loved the update.. thanks for making it long :DJuly 2nd, 2007 at 09:16pm
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aww.<3 i love it! :DJuly 2nd, 2007 at 07:18pm
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Yep, I got it (:- Vampire Heart.:
- I still love this! :D
But try and keep this in the past tense when somebody thinks. Like, for example:
I’m gonna marry him… I still can’t believe it. It feels like it’s just something we’re joking around about, but yet, next week on Friday, I’ll be a married man. With Frank… Ain’t that messed up? His age was still bothering me a bit; he’ll turn 21 this year and I mean, to get married at such a young age...
Try this:
I was gonna marry him… I still couldn’t believe it. It felt like it was just something we were joking around about, but yet, a week later on Friday, I’d be a married man. With Frank… Ain’t that messed up? His age was still bothering me a bit; he’d turn 21 that year and I mean, to get married at such a young age...
You get what I'm saying?
That just bothered me a bit so wanted to say it to you. =)
But otherwise, your English is really good :D
July 2nd, 2007 at 03:12pm -
I still love this! :D
But try and keep this in the past tense when somebody thinks. Like, for example:
I’m gonna marry him… I still can’t believe it. It feels like it’s just something we’re joking around about, but yet, next week on Friday, I’ll be a married man. With Frank… Ain’t that messed up? His age was still bothering me a bit; he’ll turn 21 this year and I mean, to get married at such a young age...
Try this:
I was gonna marry him… I still couldn’t believe it. It felt like it was just something we were joking around about, but yet, a week later on Friday, I’d be a married man. With Frank… Ain’t that messed up? His age was still bothering me a bit; he’d turn 21 that year and I mean, to get married at such a young age...
You get what I'm saying?
That just bothered me a bit so wanted to say it to you. =)
But otherwise, your English is really good :DJuly 2nd, 2007 at 10:56am -
yay update!! more soon???July 1st, 2007 at 11:08pm
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Oh.My.Fucking.God...I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!
It is the best ever and you're english is seriously amazing so there is no need to worry at all!!!
WOWOWOWOW!!! I can't wait for more!!!
C xx <3July 1st, 2007 at 10:31pm -
Aw that was to cute
Can't wait for the next update!July 1st, 2007 at 09:51pm -
THE BEST FRERARD EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:) :) :)July 1st, 2007 at 09:17pm -
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwJuly 1st, 2007 at 07:35pm
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I'm from norway : D and omg i fucking love your story :' D one of the best i ever read <3July 1st, 2007 at 04:43pm
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aww how cute of Frank to get that tattoo!
write more soon!July 1st, 2007 at 03:24pm -
thats so awesome i'm being kicked of pc so can't give fulll omgee that was amazing speech
keeep it up
xoxoJuly 1st, 2007 at 02:18pm
WE NEED TO PARTY
Damn I cried the whole way through 100 *still crying*