I'm one of the judges for the Pick a Present contest!
I like your prompt-- it sounds like a fun and interesting one to get, so I was excited to see what you did with it. And I like your idea! A cupid that brings people together for the holidays!
I really like the idea you have for this story, though the ending seems a bit rushed... I don't know, might just be me. I like the idea that they used to know each other, but that seemed to just be added into the story line as an after thought, and I think this would have worked find without it, especially if there had been more interactions between Penelope and Aiden before the scene in Times Square.
Otherwise, this was a cute piece! Good job on this!
I like your prompt-- it sounds like a fun and interesting one to get, so I was excited to see what you did with it. And I like your idea! A cupid that brings people together for the holidays!
I really like the idea you have for this story, though the ending seems a bit rushed... I don't know, might just be me. I like the idea that they used to know each other, but that seemed to just be added into the story line as an after thought, and I think this would have worked find without it, especially if there had been more interactions between Penelope and Aiden before the scene in Times Square.
Otherwise, this was a cute piece! Good job on this!