The Fallout - Comments

@ Kellinquinn.
Thank you! I just used photoshop, it's fairly basic, if you'd like me to explain, just shoot me a message! :)

how did you make the banner? it's awesome!

OMG, I missed this story so much! Yay! Now they can be together & hopefully neither of them will be killed. Hopefully Austin & Jaime can put their differences aside completely & help them out! I hope they don't get caught. I can't wait until the next update!

And, yes, the new Bring Me The Horizon album is absolutely perfect & my absolute favorite thing so far

I missed this story so much! I'm glad it's back.

I really want to be able to trust that Austin and Jaime will keep their word, but I'm wary of them. For now, though, I'll just tell myself that they're going to keep their promises because I just really want Mike and Deanna to live happily ever after!

And yes, I've heard BMTH's new album, and it is so great! I'm really excited for it to be released officially so I can get myself a physical copy of it.

I LOVE this! update soon pleaaase!

i love this a lot.
When are you going to post again? I really want to see where this goes.

This chapter was so great! Mike and Deanna are so cute together. I want to believe that Austin and Jaime won't rat, but I doubt they won't. I just want Mike and Deanna to live happily ever after!

Yes, I would read a two shot in Austin and Jaime's perspectives. I think it'd be really interesting to find out their thoughts on this whole situation.

Please, Austin couldn't be scary if tried. He is too precious for that. Besides, spinning in circles like a ballerina is not very scary. Adorable, yes. Scary, no.

iLoved it!! cant wait for more!!!

*To be warned I haven't read any of the story yet* OH MY GOD I SAW THE TITLE OF THIS AND I WAS THINKING "haha it's like the Crown The Empire song." SO THEN I GOT TO THE MAIN PAGE AND I SEE THE LYRICS AND IM FANGIRLING RIGHT NOW IM SORRY BUT YOU ARE AMAZING AND IF YOU LIVE IN DALLAS OR FRISCO I HOPE YOU WENT TO THEIR HOMETOWN SHOW ON THE 21ST BECAUSE WE WOULD HAVE BOTH BEEN THERE AND OH MY GOD I NEED TO SHUT UP. BYE ❤❤❤

Ahhh! I'd read any perspective. This story is just so amazing & I can't stop reading it! It'd probably be easier to make it a chapter in this (because that's what everyone else does). Fantastic update! I can't wait until the next one.

Yeah, I watched that music video when it came out & the whole time I was like "Austin, stahp. You're not scary..."

Aw, I love it! :o I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!

I had to read the prequel and I LOVE this. I love reading stories with Mike in them :D I love the plot as well. I'm really glad you made a sequel! Update soon! :)

lovelovelove<3333

Omg, I'm so glad there's a sequel! I was so sad when I read the one shot & didn't see any indication that there'd be more, but this story is so perfect & I love it! It kinda reminds me of Razia's Shadow, only because there's a split in of sides. Definitely keep & update soon!

Just read the one-shot and then what you have of this so far. I'm sooo addicted. lol Great so far. It was so sweet when they found each other in the field. Can't wait for the next chapter and to see what the plan is! :D

Aw, this first chapter made me so happy! Well, at first I was upset because Mike and Deanna had been kept apart for so long, but when they were reunited, I actually squealed because I was so happy. Definitely keep this!

definitely keep going with this! <3

I really like this.

I'm excited! <3