20 Days of You - Comments

Moreeeeeeee pleaseeeee

Update soon please?!

Please update this soon?

love this story! please update soon! i hope he gets Jacob back

pleaseee update soon!!

I just finished reading this and I LOVE it! I love the storyline, it's unique and of course super, super hot ;)
I love your writing style!

I cant wait to see what happens,,,PLEASE continue

Okay. So after having re-read this chapter for like the hundreth time, I trully want them to have a baby (knowingly or accidentally; second option would be funnier I think.) and I want Lucy to keep him/her and so Alice would be crazy because of it and would try everything to ruin the couple's happiness; because after all, if she is like this with Brian and Jacob, it's because she is very unhappy with her life.

Or you can simply make Alice died in a car crash and so Brian would be with his son again and he would give up the all sex thing and try to seduce Lucy again so they could be together but in the end I WANT LUCY TO HAVE A BABY WITH BRIAN

Oh my godness! I can't believe you update this story again; this is so great!

I was surprised because I did not expect Jacob to be Brian's son and the situation with his ex-girlfriend sucks so much. What a bitch! But I'm glad that Lucy and Brian are back together; now their Relationship seems to be stable since Brian had explained the whole thing to Lucy. But it's weird that she doesn't want him to kiss her anymore but I can understand. But I guess she will give up this in the end (well, I want them to kiss again)

Update soon please :DDD

Oh my, I have missed this story so much!!

I really do love the way you portray Brian in this, he's like some smouldering sex god! I was surprised she went with him, I would have probably made him squirm a little while longer but that's me, I'm a bitch haha. I'm glad she went though, Brian finally opened up to her!

Jacob sounds so cute! Did not see that coming at all!! Good twist! ;) Ugh, what did Brian see in Alice in the first place? She sounds like a total prize bitch! I can see why Lucy would feel that way though, being compared to another woman would never make you feel good, but I'm glad Brian told her the truth and introduced her to his son, even if bitch face ruined the moment! He should totally take her to court for that, she can't stop him from seeing his son!

My oh my, I have missed the sexy smut in this story, you never fail to deliver my dear! That was hot! Like, I'm sat here fanning myself it was so hot haha. I can understand too why Lucy changed kissing to one of her hard limits, she's still not completely sure if she trusts him, she doesn't want to get hurt again and them kissing makes them closer so she wants to take it away until she trusts him fully, and make him work for it!

I was swooning so bad the last few paragraphs, I do hope he does fight for her, I hope he shows her how he feels, opens up to her, shows her why he was hurt do badly. And I hope Lucy learns to trust him again, I would hate for her to give up on him once the book is done.

Gah, the feels! So glad this story is back, I cannot wait for more!! :D

Oh my god, that was both adorable and heart wrenching at exactly the same time! OH MY GOD BRIAN HAS A SON? Did I miss something? That's insane- but it's amazing at exactly the same time. And the car sex- hot as hell! Hehehe, he's a dirty bastard but he's cute at exactly the same time. More soon please I want more!

I'm glad they are fine... kinda... again :) But Brian... forget about everything and send that bitch to a court and figh for your fucking son, don't let that bitch take it away from you.

Yay! I am so glad you are back to writing this! Ive missed it! Cant wait to see more and how they play out :3

Well damn! I'm so glad you updated this :D Alice seems like a bitch and I really hope Brian reconsiders going to court for his son. I was surprised that Lucy even went with him at all, but now she at least understands now. Please please please update soon!

HOLY SHIT what a way to come back!! there's SO many emotions with this chapter it's unreal!!! first of all... i'm so surprised she went with him.. but i'm really glad she did. she got to see the side of him he didn't really want her to see and that speaks MOUNTAINS. i fully understand why she didn't forgive him and i'm just shocked she said it in the way she didn't want him to kiss her anymore. omGOSH I WANT MORE NOW.

OMG!! iT'S AN UPDATE AND ugh!!! I want him to take her to court for the little boy because that isn't right of Alice at all!! Ugh!

Omg you have to update!!!! I'm barely hanging on here! I wanna know hat happened with Alice and I want to see Lucy and Brian work out

God. PLEASE update, I'm hanging on a thread here! You're an amazing writer!

O.O wow.