20 Days of You - Comments

  • bohemianfapsody

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    wow, just wow. i don't even know what to say. if it's true, then wow brian is an asshole
    June 8th, 2013 at 04:26am
  • Hell-Cat

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    DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING! So glad to have you back! :)
    June 5th, 2013 at 06:05pm
  • bryanaa7x

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    Plot twist! Holy shit wasn't expecting that. Keep it coming. I'm eager to know what happens!
    June 3rd, 2013 at 09:06pm
  • AnyaMai

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    :O holy shit what just happened
    June 3rd, 2013 at 10:30am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Oh my God! I seriously didn't see that coming. If what Matt says is true, Brian's a jerk. He shouldn't have let this go on so long. That being said....holy hot threesome! ;-)
    June 3rd, 2013 at 09:14am
  • HanerJoy

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    I definitely didn't see that one coming O.O the little treat withh Matt was hot but I think, he did that on purpose, he knew Lucy was gonna hear them. And Brian needs to let Alice go, and needs to come clean with Lucy. Update soon I can't wait to read more :D
    June 2nd, 2013 at 06:18pm
  • StacieIerogeance

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    LE GASP! that was a twist I was not expecting. if I was in brian's shoes I would just come out and tell lucy everything especially if he doesn't want to fuck up what hopefully isn't fake feelings because she looks like his ex whatever girlfriend or sub but matt had no right to say those things while she was in the other room, yes she had to hear them but it could have waited, cant wait until you update again cuz i wanna know what's gonna happen
    June 2nd, 2013 at 01:27pm
  • teenstar

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    Oh no... Matt, what have you done?? They were perfect together. But at the same time, it was meant to happen someday because Brian was hiding (important) things to Lucy. Now the question is: what will they do for 7 next days? I'm very curious to see what will happen in the future for them both; I had a lot of questions in my mind and I want answers like everybody else I think. So, please UPDATE SOON (Why aren't we next Friday already?!) Mr. Green
    June 2nd, 2013 at 11:06am
  • carpe-vengeance

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    So happy you're updating again! This chapter was amazing so much emotion all in one. Can't wait for the next one :D
    June 2nd, 2013 at 10:45am
  • headrushxreeta

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    Wow, what an end to the hiatus!!! Loved the threesome action, although I'm sure you know I'm upset about the Brian situation. Very disappointed in him even though I think he's telling the truth, I think he couldn't help himself. He got some ass kissing to do though! Can't wait for the next update, welcome back!!! :)))
    June 2nd, 2013 at 12:22am
  • Lucyy Jayy

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    What a douche. Really? He kept her around cause she looks like the cheating bitch he was with before? He really dipped down low, he went beyond rock bottom. I'm glad Lucy put and end to this. I would've just broken the arrangement with Brian and started one with Matt, right in front of Brian (I'm probably saying that cause I'm a Shadows fan lol). It was a very douche of a move Brian E. Haner!

    I'm really enjoying this story 'cause the female character's name (Lucy), is mine as well. And I think we all know that I put myself in her place lmao!
    June 1st, 2013 at 09:23pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    I just wanted to cry when I read the end and how she thinks Brian was using her and maybe he was. Now that I hear that he goes to the diner every morning! Oh my gosh why now Matt?? I can't wai to read more!
    June 1st, 2013 at 07:13pm
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Yay the story is back! I missed it XD
    Brian and Matt? DAMN I think I died reading that.
    I did not see that coming. Brian, why are you an idiot? You better run after her, get down on your knees and beg for her forgiveness Mister!!
    Update soon please?
    June 1st, 2013 at 06:27pm
  • heretic.

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    Yay! Story's back! :D *dances*
    Okay, I think that right there is the best damn description of a kiss I have ever read! I'm all hot and bothered and I haven't even made it that far down the page! XD
    "Oh, baby you have no idea what you've just said. I'm going to make sure my tongue taste every inch of your delicious body,"
    I think my eyes all but rolled into the back of my head at that. Phew.
    Oh mah gahhhd! Brian AND Matt?! wow, okay. Dead! The images I have in my head, Jesus Christ!
    Oh man! I did not see that coming! Shit! Oh my Gates! Brian you idiot! Go, go run after her and beg for forgiveness!! Awesome, amazing chapter that has left me a big drooling mess! XD
    Excuse me while I go douse myself in cold water! More soon :D
    June 1st, 2013 at 04:26pm
  • CharlieHunnam

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    holy crap that was an unexpected twist! never saw that one coming, that she would look like the girl who broke his heart. i don't blame her though; i would've bust out the door before then and just rip him a new one. good for her but damn if that doesn't make me sad :(
    June 1st, 2013 at 04:21pm
  • Moriarty;

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    IT'S BACCCKKKKK! I was just so excited I need to put that in capital letters.
    Oooh sexytimes with Matt- I like it! I do love it when he's introduced at random to stories. Super hot threesome too, no wonder she was having such mind blowing orgasms!
    And oooh suspense- she heard their conversation! OH MY GOD NO SHE CAN'T LEAVE- THEY'RE NOT ALLOWED TO BREAK UP! Matt what have you done? I'm going to have to put you in the naughty corner for messing things up. Tut tut. More soon please- I must have more!
    June 1st, 2013 at 03:22pm
  • Fadingdreams

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    update soon!!
    May 27th, 2013 at 04:24pm
  • Tickle Me Sara

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    I miss this story you should update
    May 22nd, 2013 at 10:50am
  • teenstar

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    Friday seems so far... :D but that's nothing. I re-read the story from the beginning and all I have to say: everything is PERFECT.
    April 22nd, 2013 at 10:43pm
  • Foos922

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    Your story is absolutely amazing. I love it. Dont ever stop!
    April 21st, 2013 at 10:31am