20 Days of You - Comments

  • headrushxreeta

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    Talk about pushing her threshold, lol. This chapter was super awesome! I'm glad she's warming up to Brian more and more and I hope she keeps it up! Can't wait for the next update :)
    April 15th, 2013 at 10:43pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Amazing update :D
    I'm glad that Lucy will give Brian a chance..he's good for her.
    April 13th, 2013 at 11:11pm
  • bryanaa7x

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    Soo worth the wait hun! This was great! They really need to get together soon..haha
    April 13th, 2013 at 04:39pm
  • heretic.

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    Oh my! Definitely worth any wait! This chapter was one big ball of hot, sexy, romantic, cute. Unnff! Loved it! Give him a chance Lucy!! Hope you feel better soon :)
    April 13th, 2013 at 01:34pm
  • Moriarty;

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    I loved the chapter- it was well worth the wait hun! The two of them just need to get together already, fuck the friends thing- they're perfect for each other! Also, yes, I shall bring your attention to the story she is telling you about as I happen to be the other writer- go read it! It's awesome!
    April 13th, 2013 at 09:49am
  • teenstar

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    I don't know if I have to be happy Lucy wanted to break the law because I fear that Brian he's playing with her right now, I fear he said that to other women to seduce them and then, threw them away like shit... Anyway I hope I'm wrong and that he will keep her for a long, long time. I'm also glad Brian told her about his life.
    April 13th, 2013 at 09:44am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Ugh. It won't let me edit my comment. I meant "THANK goodness."
    April 13th, 2013 at 09:20am
  • Think goodness! Lol. They're on the same page--the page that tells them to break the rules! Haha! :)
    April 13th, 2013 at 09:18am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Yay! At least they're thinking about breaking the rules :)
    April 13th, 2013 at 08:17am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Oh my gosh that was hot and I love how you make it so real :)! Oh gosh I feel some lol I wont say it!! I can't wait to read more! Now he wants to be with her and now he wants a chance and she is willing to break the rules, or well so she says! I'm anxious to see where it is going :)!
    April 13th, 2013 at 06:51am
  • Synful Cocktail

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    YAAAAAAY! They're thinking about breaking the rules! Yay!
    April 13th, 2013 at 06:08am
  • StacieIerogeance

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    I love this chapter and I'm glad she finally told himt hat sh e was thinking of breaking the rules
    April 13th, 2013 at 05:11am
  • HanerJoy

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    brake the rules lucy :D break the rules :D I know I would :D this was hot but at the same time beautiful :) the way he's protetive of her, and how much he care for her is beautiful :D Update soon :D
    April 13th, 2013 at 05:04am
  • Fadingdreams

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    Smile
    April 7th, 2013 at 10:10am
  • foREVerTegan:D

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    Oh that poor girl Brianis such a tease
    April 5th, 2013 at 03:48am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Amazing update :)
    Brian you naughty naughty boy teasing her like at the dinner party. Hopefully he reward her really really good later tonight ;)
    April 4th, 2013 at 10:50pm
  • heretic.

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    I really shouldn't have read this while at work... Holy fucking wow! This chapter was epic!! Brian is a naughty, naughty man! I loved that he called her his girlfriend though! Me thinks that when the 20 days are up he's not gonna be able to let her go. I hope not anyway! And I cannot wait to see what he does to her when he gets her home!!! My face is all red now from reading this haha. You have two more readers, my bosses want to read it! Hahaha
    April 4th, 2013 at 03:12pm
  • yuna131422

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    Brian is an evil man. Haha. Now I can't wait for more.
    April 4th, 2013 at 10:40am
  • teenstar

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    He is falling and I really hope she will give up the rules too. It's funny to see how he's acting in front of other people but I wished Lucy had told him how she felt when he called her his girlfriend. Maybe in the next chapter, who knows? ... But these two really need to be together in a near future, that's for sure! Can't wait until next Wednesday :)
    April 4th, 2013 at 10:34am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    That was seriously evil. Lol. I wouldn't have been able to hide what was going on. But ANYWAY...he's so into her. I don't care what rules he's set for himself, he's falling. :) I can't wait for next Wednesday!!!!!!!
    April 4th, 2013 at 09:11am