July 8th, 2014 at 03:25am
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Wow you should update I really like this!August 19th, 2013 at 08:51pm
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Please update:)July 24th, 2013 at 07:13am
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Please update thisJune 19th, 2013 at 09:38pm
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update sooon!February 7th, 2013 at 12:07pm
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I am in love with this story! Please update it! And soon~!December 29th, 2012 at 01:55am
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I Like It ! I Think Yu Should Keep Writing It . Cant Wait For The Next Update !December 24th, 2012 at 04:09am
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Like Smilie said, I think it's a little odd how Liza goes from rebellious to giving in so quickly - I think having her continue to fight him off would be more realistic. I also think that a bit more description would be good. But I like how you managed to give a clear insight into what her life was like beforehand.December 3rd, 2012 at 06:26pm
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I first off liked how simplistic the layout was, and the story itself was different than what I would usually read. I also liked the way the characters spoke as it fits the setting and time of the story. Overall this was a very interesting read, so good job!December 3rd, 2012 at 05:48pm -
It's a really good start. There could be a lot more too it, though. She was very rebellious at first, then toned down a lot rather quickly. For someone she seemed to hate so much, she warmed up fast. I think she should be more apprehensive.December 3rd, 2012 at 02:28pm
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It's a really good start. There could be a lot more too it, though. She was very rebellious at first, then toned down a lot rather quickly. For someone she seemed to hate so much, she warmed up fast. I think she should be more apprehensive.December 3rd, 2012 at 02:28pm
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Good so far :)December 3rd, 2012 at 02:26pm
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You should keep goingDecember 3rd, 2012 at 02:21pm
UPDATE NOW