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UPDATE
UPDATE NOW

Wow you should update I really like this!

Please update:)

Please update this

update sooon!

I am in love with this story! Please update it! And soon~!

I Like It ! I Think Yu Should Keep Writing It . Cant Wait For The Next Update !

Like Smilie said, I think it's a little odd how Liza goes from rebellious to giving in so quickly - I think having her continue to fight him off would be more realistic. I also think that a bit more description would be good. But I like how you managed to give a clear insight into what her life was like beforehand.

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I first off liked how simplistic the layout was, and the story itself was different than what I would usually read. I also liked the way the characters spoke as it fits the setting and time of the story. Overall this was a very interesting read, so good job!

It's a really good start. There could be a lot more too it, though. She was very rebellious at first, then toned down a lot rather quickly. For someone she seemed to hate so much, she warmed up fast. I think she should be more apprehensive.

It's a really good start. There could be a lot more too it, though. She was very rebellious at first, then toned down a lot rather quickly. For someone she seemed to hate so much, she warmed up fast. I think she should be more apprehensive.

Good so far :)

You should keep going