Take Me Home - Comments

Loving this so far. You write extremely well. Please keep writing.

Ahh I really like this story but she needs to stop being so rude to Niall, he's only being nice!

@ Schadenfreude.
Mmmmyes. That he is. Break his heart.

I like that you include things that happen to us in real life in our story. I cannot apologize enough for kicking you out of bed that one time. Especially because he's an asskoogle.

well, niall, you're an ass.
just saying.

So the weirdest thing happened while reading this story. When Lincoln said "It might be fun," without reading on, my eyebrow raised. Then I felt dumb and predictable when you wrote my eyebrow raise. Awk. Anyway.
10/10, A+, Bravo!

@ Schadenfreude.
I try. :)

@ Krystal-Khaos
Yay! I'm so happy to hear that! :)

Ah! Struggling musicians! Beautimous!

I like it. :)