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Please update!!!!! This story is awesome and it's sad that it's just bein left

But in all sad honesty, I don't think your cowriter is coming back so you might just need to make the story your own now :/ this is too good of a story to let slip through the cracks!!

Okay so I'm really gonna need for this to be updated again soon. I literally started reading this at 6:00 and it's only 7:38 now and I'm done. Like my heart is actually aching for more! Ughhh I'm so inlove with this story!!

This is great! :) I can't wait for more!

I forgot how much I love this ! Update again please?

Updateeeeeeeeee plzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!

Why isn't being updated? :(

Oh my gosh!! Bennett just needs to tell him already!!! Looking forward to more :) I don't like Tavern at all!!

This is so cute, I'm can't handle it. I sorta like Tavern, is that wrong? Probably because he is obviously the antagonist in this story, but he's sorta cute in a creepy let me stalk you sort of way. I just really like straight forward characters, but I'm guessing that he has some hidden motive and etc. etc. but bad boys are cool too. Hehe. c:

Anyway, I am in love with the plot, it's just so mysterious and I really am enjoying how everything is slowly starting to make sense, except there are a few spots in the plots I'm a bit confused about. I'm assuming though that you guys are going to be filling those blanks in as the story processes. For example, is the entire town a pack of wolves and their mates? Is Occamy a wolf too? Is there dad a wolf too? Why hasn't Alchemy changed yet? What's with all this alpha crap? Okay maybe not a bit, but a lot but that just adds to the fun of reading this story! I love the Benny and Alchemy moments, and I can't decide what is cuter, Alchemy and Benny (in wolf form) or Alchemy and Bennett (in human form). I'm just sitting here screaming at Alchemy for not understand how much Bennett wants him and is settling for Tavern. God Alchemy, come on! I really want to know more about Occamy and Tale's relationship though, there so cute. I really love them.

If you guys don't mind some constructive criticism, feel free to ignore this if you wish. Try to be more descriptive, there is being over descriptive but in this case I don't even have a general idea of what the main characters look like. For example what colour is Benny's fur when he's in his wolf form? What does Alchemy look like? Describe the surroundings more and paint a picture for your audience.

I'm really enjoying this story for far, please keep up the good work both of you! c:

awh I like this story it's so sweet (: But I wish Bennet could just tell him ):

Oh my.. I just love this story.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
fantastic story :)

nooo Alchemy don't break Bennet's heart :'(

OMG THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC

:O I found this story and I couldn't walk away from it. I really love it and I can't wait to see more.

(reminds me of a story like this I read a few years ago)

Haha how could he not know those eyes. Though Bennett should really just tell him!!! Can't wait for more :)

Haha, the author's note was like, exactly what I was thinking! I loved the update [: This story is so great. I'm getting a little impatient with waiting on Bennett to tell Alchemy that he's Benny and that they're supposed to be mates. lol, I've never had patience for anything though :P lovely update!

This is absolute perfection!!!!
I'm so in love with this, love isn't a strong enough word for it.
Update soon :-D

I cannot wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!

You absolutely have to update this, there is no other option. I can't even describe how I feel about this, love isn't strong enough. Seriously, amazing guys!

Love it!! I would love to read more. Update soon!! =)