Echo - Comments

@ outthewindow.
Thanks muchly sugar, the original version is still on the site if you want to see how it's changed when I begin getting into it more

Here for comment swap. With one chapter, there's not really much I can say. It's a good start, though. You're writing is well done and pretty interesting. I'm sorry to see about you getting banned and such. I commend you for coming back and tweaking your story as I'm eventually trying to do the same and know that it can sometimes be difficult to stray from what you've already written. But, yeah, good job. Keep it up. :)

I was pretty excited about this when I read that you were gonna change it. I loved the story! Can't wait.

Hey look you're back! God I hate it when that happens, they've done that to you twice now and it even pisses me off. Anyways, I'm glad you re-uploaded, I've noticed you've changed some bits and if you're going to change the story line, oh hell we're going to be in for one aren't we? ;D

Update soon! <3