Falling Falling Snow - Comments

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I liked the first chapter a lot, the way they just sit there together in the snow. The descriptions were vivid but not too long and the weather is perfect for how cold he is towards her in the end. As far as the second chapter, I understand the alcohol and cigarette situation far too well. Actually cracked a smile, reminded me so much of the old self stealing wine from whoever and grieving the dwindling cigarettes haha. Over all it was a very relatable story. Short, sweet, and to the point. I'm glancing down at the previous comments now and noticing that they were two years ago... so best of luck if you do finish up and very well done if you don't. :)

This was really sad, but kinda sweet too, in a way. The way she loves him even still, and it's so destructive because love can be really ugly and beautiful at the same. time. This is amazing hun <3

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I'm really hoping to read more from this, so far im enjoying it because you're writing to him. I can even relate becuase I've been through this kind of thing before so it just feels even more real to me. Least to say I loved it and I can't wait to read more!

I really like the direction that you went with this! It was simple, but not at all in a bad way. Your descriptions were just right and they didn;t drag on and on like some other ones do. The layout is also simple, which helps the reader. I can't wait for the second installment of this because I know for sure I'll be reading it haha! Keep up the great work!