If These Sheets Were States - Comments

'how the story ends...'
Not sure if that was intentionally ironic or not. With there being an ATL song called that.
Ugh, I'm sad. I mean, kudos for not making it cliche and making it more realistic I suppose, but aww...
Yeah, guess I'm not too much about that life. XD Realistic, boo. XD
I'm just a hopeless romantic. So I didn't particularly like the ending, but, ah well. I'll live.
Great job with the writing though. You are still an amazing writer regardless. And I'm glad this story got an ending instead of just leaving it hanging. I admire you for finally finishing it. :)

Oh my. Poor girl. :/
This is intense. Holy shit, she drank a lot. :O
I hope things start to improve soon.
But great update, none the less. Very raw and honest; usually these details tend to be skipped over in stories but I'm glad that you're covering it because we're able to see how it's really affecting her. I am sad that this is happening, though. :(
Can't wait for more!

OH MY GOD ARE YOU SERIOUS.
ALEX. SERIOUSLY. SERIOUSLY.
That ass like WTF. HE kisses her and then tries to blame HER for it?! Like what the fuck if you're going to react like that at least take full blame for it. It was his fault and now he's messing with her emotions even more ugh.
And Jen's not good for him? HA. More like the other way around with Chelsea not being good for him.
I haven't been this pissed at a story in a long time, LMAO, so kudos to that. This is a good thing because it means I'm really getting into it. XD Don't mind my rant, really, I just need to vent a little bit. XD
I need more OMG I need to know what happens next. :O

But now, let me try to calm down a little and respond to your comment, aha.
I can't wait for some more inquiries to be answered. Like there is like even more explaining to do now I think. I cannot believe he did that. OMG.
But yay! That means a lot that my comment motivated you. :D Like I said, I can't wait to see where this goes. :) And that's awesome you're taking other readers into consideration. :)

Ugh I am still so frustrated with this chapter lol. I am like... >:( Such an ass, seriously. Like I think she just needs to kiss another guy in front of him to give him a dose of his own medicine. XD That probably won't turn out too well but I'm just kind of at this angry state... XD Maybe that will put some realization into him like oh my God...
Like he'll want to be the last guy she ever kisses. XD That's incredibly cliche but I am feeling it.
Just ignore me this comment is all over the place from being angry at him and then wanting them to be together lol. XD
But yeah, can't wait for the next one! :D

@nanook thankyou for your comment! Some very good questions and all will be answered in time, I will be uploading again soon maybe today or tomorrow!

I wasn't sure whether to come back but your comment defiantly was the reason why I wanted too! It was nice to see that somebody was still reading something I hadn't updated in years and I thought I would try and give it a go again :) I will definitely try and contiune this till the end, I'm not sure how many more chapters I'm planning to do yet but I really want to make it complete just in case someone else comes along and finds it and feels the same way you did. I am still thinking about a new story but it is nice to know that I will have your support on it thankyou :)

OMG.
This made me tear up, because it got me thinking about how if this happened in real life... oh my God, I don't know what I would do. :((((
That letter/announcement type thing was so real, so kudos to that. Really. That actually sounds like how they would announce. Hope to God it never really happens though.
Ughhh... screw Chelsea. It is her fault, it has to be. I hate her. >:(
Whyyyy is Alex still with her ugh what is wrong with him. Is the baby even his? Excellent question. I mean I don't know what you were intending but I personally feel like it isn't but that's just me. XD I'm team Jen for this so I guess it would make sense that I would think this. XD I feel so bad for her, awww...
This chapter left me sad and aggravated at Alex and ugh. XD I hope you update again soon.
And by the way, YOU UPDATED. OMG. I was not expecting that. Usually people never come back to stories but you did once you saw my comment, aww. I'm glad my comment made a difference that makes me so happy. :))
I also found it interesting how you just went forward 2 years. A bit odd but I can understand why you did. To fit better with how they are now I suppose.
Oddly enough I'm actually wearing the Future Hearts tour shirt right now holla holla! XD Okay I'll stop but I just found that kind of funny. XD
Can't wait for more! :DD I really hope to see an end to this, but I also encourage you to pursue another story if you are inspired to write one. If it's another AG one, let me know and I'll check it out. But if you want to do an original that's fine too. :)

Sad to see this was never finished. :( But I checked this one out since I loved your other story, and I really like this one too!
But I just wanted to comment to show that if you ever do choose to continue it, I will be here. But I understand if you don't; I can understand losing inspiration for a story.
I would love to see an ending to this though, maybe someday...
Your writing definitely improved with this one. :)

thanks for updating!

Damn it, no! She can't be pregnant! She's just making it up, right? Please? Ugh, damn. Anyway... Jen and Jack, huh? I was actually waiting for it since the first chapter and I really don't know how I feel about it. I think she deserves to be happy so does Jack... but her happiness is so in the place where Alex is... However, you're amazing as always and I can't wait for more.

love the update even though it's just a filler, can't wait for more :) so glas she agreed to be friends... I mean... almost everything starts with friends, right? ;)

LOL Poor Cass.... :p

im glad theyre going to try to be friends! :)

Please continue!

This is so good!
Ugh
Please update I'm really into the whole story line. Keep it up! :)

@ balladofben
thankyou! i wont leave it so long to update the next chapter i've already started writing it:-)

omg i want to know what happen. been waiting for it. nice plot btw! :-)

@ somebody_who_cares
that's why i chose the title because it was my favourite song off of Don't Panic, i love Backseat Serandae aswell! :-)

cant wait :] and the tittle for the story is one of my favorite songs from the album along with Backseat Seranade :]

Can't wait for this story to start!!