Just a Fool - Comments

Last chapter was confusing!! Omg let's see how this sequel goes

I'm really trying to understand this story. Especially chp 14. She said she was dreaming and now all of a sudden she's in the room where her sister is. I know she was supposedly kidnapped in the last chapter but when you started the next chapter with it's a dream that threw me off. This whole story is confusing. It's good but there's some stuff that doesn't make sense, isn't worded right and it throws me off. I have to re read it a few times to try and get the jist of it.

fucker is dead.. they're free.. mel is happy with zacky.. evie is happy and I bet matt is miserable.. okay that he fucked up and everything like that but to just cut him out of her life?? damn.. gah totally loved this story and can't wait for the sequel to begin <3

Update soon!

Please update again as soo as you can. I'm loving this story:)

So glad they're both okay :) update soon!! :)

Wow. Great story! Update soon pls :D

Update soo!! :D

ooh mel is pregnant?? probably not marcus' though since he said that she seem feisty?? oh well at least i hope that it isn't his

awwe matt remembers a kiss from ages ago! so cute!!

bang bang she shot him down!! hopefully she didn't miss or that the bullet went through him and hit mel too.. that would just be cruel

Aww poor Mel
Evie should just shoot him
Get it over and done with
Matt finally realize that he loves Evie.....took him long enough lol
Can't wait to read more

janey's got a gun.. heheh okay her name isn't janey but still.. that song just popped into my head i hope it's loaded and that she blows his brains- or lack there of- out aaweh she can't just give up on mattie.. they belong together even if he's a stubborn little man that's scared to face the facts

Die marcus, die! haha xD Can't wait for the next update!

I love this can't wait for the next chapter I really need to know what's going to happen!!!!! XD

I love this can't wait for the next chapter I really need to know what's going to happen!!!!! XD

him, her and their baby?? holy moly marcus really is a fucked up motherfucker!! i hope the bastard makes a mistake that leads either the cops or matt and the boys to his doorstep so that they can kick his sorry ass to the moon and back and yeah love the sound of a sequel

oh my god! i'm gonna freak if she really does get pregnant by Marcus!

Oh my gosh I can't believe that he is trying to get her pregnant!! No Matt needs to find her and stop him before he can do that!

I love this story, update again soon! I can't wait to read more!!

This story is really good!
Can't wait to read more!