Land Ahead. - Comments

update please!!

Really hope you update soon

Really hope you update soon

ohhmygee please please update please!!!

ahhhhh i'm hooked on this story! update soon

Oh goodness update soon please

Okay, so not on to the next story *hides under bed in shame for assuming such things* Oh boy, here comes Tamara to wreck the day! Chapter 28 soon?

Great update, can't wait for more of this, and I'm excited to see how tis ends and the sequel begins!

I don't want to sound mean by saying this, so please realize that wasn't the intention. The intention is just constructive critisism.

For as short as the chapter was, and the long wait between I would have liked to see more happen than just a huge circle. First she is going but then she just decides not to, I felt like that was all there was to the chapter. I wish it would have been a bit longer and maybe fleshed out with more than that. But otherwise you have a great storyline. :)

Finally caught up with this and I am still totally in love with it. Keep up the good work! More soon.

Now on the the third story!

A heart to break and a pirate to save? Who's heart would she break?

Don't kid yourself Maggie, you'd hand feed him any day if he promised you forever lol

Don't kid yourself Maggie, you'd hand feed him any day if he promised you forever lol

I kinda feel bad that she didn't believe him when he said he was working for Cora to protect Maggie and Morgan but hey, I'm sure something will come of it.

chapter 17 was kinda sweet :)

hmmmm.....something big he says...something big with Cora written all over it....

He's totally hiding something. You're not delusional.

Yes Hook, you're a daddy! Now stop being a prick and be nice to the lady.

I didn't realize how short these chapters were if it only takes about 3 minutes between reviews. Oh well, chapter 6 it is then.