Primus Amor. - Comments

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! omigod! i love it one of the best Louis fanfics i've read!

I really feel bad for the girl. She has so much on her plate!
But I do want to see how Louis interferes.

Haha his man period.
I didn't think Portia was gonna step up and actually call him.
I mean if it was me I would have jumped his bones on the "date."
But I mean, that's just me....;)
ANYWAYSS again, another amazing update, I'm excited for the next one :D <3

Okay seriously that was some nice foreshadowing at the end haha. I like how you're starting off their relationship slow. I'm sure there is more to Portia then what you have written so far and I can't wait to read it and how the story progresses. Update soon!

Makes more sense haha! I really like how you added a bit if Cinderella into the mix. Very cute I can't wait for more!:)

So was Portia at the party or on the phone? Pardon my stupidness haha.

This is cute so far. Just some advice, try not to switch POV rapidly because yes, it gets confusing and it can just cause readers to become antsy. I did that for one of my old stories and it didn't turn out too well haha.

Please update soon, I really like this so far! :)
xx