Lucas Manor - Comments

This is awesome. O_O
Keep posting! x

This is SOOOO good. I've just finished reading Chapter Six and I love the story. Im also a fan of vampire diaries so the fact that Damon is in the story makes it even better. (: Please update soon!

I love how it once seemed like a bad place but now it has a sort of silver lining. Like an improvement on life. I wonder what Damon is going to do next. He has to have a plan.

Can't wait for chapter 7!!! Wouldn't it be badass if the vervaine was like in a tattoo somewhere where he hasn't seen it yet? Just throwin that out there

I usually just proofread/revise to make sure that what the characters are saying is logical, so that their motivations and emotions make sense with what they're saying. It's especially hard writing for Scarlett because she's a slave and is very headstrong/wants to fight it/etc but all I really want her to do is be sweet and sexy and just love Damon! ...Then again, it wouldn't be interesting or realistic if she did that from the start. GAH.

Wow.... I feel bad for Ainsley.... For her past, and the fact that I feel her love for Leo is just him using compulsion on her.... And if you ever want someone to help proofread and/or edit, I am open to it. I don't see EVERYTHING, but that is because I am human. But I would try my best. :)

Omg. I just read the new chapter and loved it... Of course lol. This is one of the best VD stories on this site. I can't wait to read the next chapter!! Please please PLEASE don't keep us waiting for too long for chapter 6. Like I said I love the direction this story is going..... Keep up the great work.

lol, glad to help :]

@ neon.band.aids.
YOU JUST GAVE ME A GREAT IDEA!!!!!!!!!!! Well, rather it was a great idea that added on to my already great other idea. Anyway, I think I've got a little bit of direction for this story.

Your welcome lovely! Hmm.... I am getting VERY curious as to where the vervaine could be, seeing as it isn't in her blood, and she has taken a shower since getting there, and it's not like she knew what vervaine was when she got there... Damn I'm curious! Loved ch5 and can't wait for the sixth! I'm sure it's to die for! (I couldn't help but say that... Lol) <3

I wonder if it will work, making her want to stay 'the hard way'. I wonder if she's not wearing vervain but there's some other reason she resists comulsion.

I'm kinda sorta really addicted... And this is me begging... For more... And soon... PWWWEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Definitely subscribed! Update soon!

Thank you guys so much! I've written a third chapter that I'm currently looking over and also starting a fourth. I'd like to bring some other characters and action into it after a few more chapters. What kind of action would you guys like to see? I've got a few things I'm thinking about...

I like the concept.... So far so good can't wait to read more

I like this. :) Good job.