The Harpy & Gargoyle - Comments

Comment swap: The only thing I would change is to 'cut' the text into sections and put a little space in between to make it easier to read. As far as the story itself goes you certainly caught my attention and I would love to read more of this. Please?

Comment swap: The only thing I would change is to 'cut' the text into sections and put a little space in between to make it easier to read. As far as the story itself goes you certainly caught my attention and I would love to read more of this. Please?

comment swap, I felt like I hadn't read enough. I'm not a fan of very short stories but they always seem to interest me and want to read on. I'd like to read more if you expand it. So I think it would use a layout. I found not spelling or grammar stuff I need to talk about. I really like this piece though, I think I could read a whole book if it was continued.

Hello there. Xd Comment swap brought me to this interesting story of yours. Xd I read the first chapter or better called prologue and it seams kind of interesting but you could make it more eye-catching, more interesting. I would like to read more of this, if you decide to continue with it. Xd Keep up the great work and share your imagination with all of us, readers. Xd

Hello there. Xd Comment swap brought me to this interesting story of yours. Xd I read the first chapter or better called prologue and it seams kind of interesting but you could make it more eye-catching, more interesting. I would like to read more of this, if you decide to continue with it. Xd Keep up the great work and share your imagination with all of us, readers. Xd

Hello there. Xd Comment swap brought me to this interesting story of yours. Xd I read the first chapter or better called prologue and it seams kind of interesting but you could make it more eye-catching, more interesting. I would like to read more of this, if you decide to continue with it. Xd Keep up the great work and share your imagination with all of us, readers. Xd