Cigarette Burns - Comments

ahhhhh fucking ammmasssing omg.. i love it need more im cought up lol now im gonna get food i coudnt eat with out reading lol:P love u love the story cant wait for moree...

=O oh no!

lol.

lmfao Rhi.
Your comment seriously just made my day.
(L)

psh. it's so obv a twinkie. riley's just a little overwhelmed.
obv a twinkie. matt will nom nom nom it and everything will be fine.

oh shit!!!!....
i knew that knife part was coming...
i was jsut waiting for it ..
more soon?
i hope the knife gets turned ant stabbs tony!

omg.!
update soon.!
no knife =[

NOOOOOOOO!
Not, 'MATT HE HAS A KNIFE!'
Thats always the bad part. :'[

More please! :]

HE HAS A KNIFE!?!
Lindsay, update!!!!!
I can't think what will happen next!
Man, this is a good story!

<3 you twin!!!

update!!!!

daaaaaaammmmmmmmmnnnn...
look at matt being all knight in shining armor <3 i love it! lol. what? it's about time that riley be shown that she deserves more than the jackass tony, seriously. although i didn't expect tony to actually fight matt. thought he was gonna pull a coward move and like, drag her off or something. so i'm not gonna lie, tony earned me a TINY little bit of respect from me. But it does NOT make it ok for tony to be doing that shit!!!
*ahem*
i feel better now lol. but like cmon now, anyone who could stand up to the hulk that is matt sanders earns a tiiiiiinnnyyy little bit of respects. but i guess it was a given that he was gonna fight dirty. hell, i expected him to have that knife already on him as soon as i read that he was willing to fight matt. oh yeah, KUDOS TO SHADOWS! lol taking that beer bottle right in the arm and not even flinching?! holy cow! honestly!
and even though this is like, the crazy climatic fight scene, i kind of like how you concentrated more on what riley was thinking, on how the fight and its repercussions were/would affect her. it made the details that you did describe of the fight that much more powerful and effective =]
BAH!!! DON"T LEAVE US HANGING HERE!
god i hate cliffhangers...oh well this story is too amazing not to continue to read. good job girlie! this story is so intense and i love it <3

I am so totally virtually kicking your ass, Lyn-Z. This story is better than anything my little brain can come up with!!!!!!!!!!!! O.O

.....WTF!?

XD Loved it chickie!

oh my god this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update please!!!!!!!

MATT GROWLED?
oooo la la.

ROFL. fierce, baby, fierce !

whoaa. this is really good. I really like it.
*subscribes*
more soon pleasee I need to know what happens nextt likee noww! :D

i love you for telling me when you update. seriously, i do.
and lucky me! even though i'm uber-late in response to chapter 20, i'm just in time for 21! that's so awesome!
ack! tony the jackass is back! god...i can't believe that he thinks it's ok to say things like that! honestly, how insecure can a guy be? that he would treat riley like that? ugh...i can't even comment on him anymore because it pisses me off too much.
NOOOOOO she turned around! i can't believe that! she should have just used the door opening as a distraction and like, ran. but it's your story =] which i like a lot btw. i love it. and FINALLY she stands up for herself! it's about freaking time! haha and those were some totally awesome witty comebacks. if it was in different circumstances, i bet it'd make for some hilarious banter. well...minus the jackass and his whole dominating i-gotta-be-the-biggest-jerk-of-the-century act. oh well.
i'm glad you're not making matt the typical knight in shining armor =] it's nice. like i mean, yeah i want him to save her, but i like how it's different. breath of fresh air, i say. i like it.
and awwwwww to matt's mood changing when he saw her face! like, one minute, he's taking those crazy deep breaths to calm himself, and the next he's all broken-down and puppy dog-like. but HAHAHA to the hulk comment! god, i always thought sanders was pretty scary. all the girls are like "omg he's so built he's so hot" but i've always thought he kinda looked like he was gonna tear his shirt off and pound his chest with his hands and turn green. so kudos to that. but i like him in your story since he's such a sweetheart. he admitted that he loves her!!!!!!! and even though it's so serious, i'm not gonna lie. i laughed because he's like "I LOVE HER" and then he growls and changes moods. it's awesomeness. but i love it! i'm glad you're not rushing the confrontation either sweetie. i think that's the mark of an amazing writer <3 really, i do. it takes real skill to build up to something and then just take your time with it. that being said...don't take too much time! i'm dying to know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ohhhh shit!!!

oh shit is right.

Even though this was a sad chapter, the last part made me crack a smile.
Matt needs to seriously kick that pricks ass.
I can't stand to read him in the story anymore....

but good update!
I can't wait for the next one!!!!

OMG!! update please!!!