Gotham's Brightest - Comments

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.

Jack is so sexy and calm, even when being kidnapped :)

I love the whole "Evtta the Lady Clown" thing. He's an expert on clowns, lolzz.

She's gonna give him his scars isnt she? Oh godddddddd noooooo.

Cliffhanger! I like how your character is a total badass. :D

Ah! I don't know what's going on but I like it! Update soon!

This, is pure genius. I've never read a fanfic like this. I am extremely excited to see where it goes! :3
Subscribed and Recommended. Lots of love.
-FallingUp.

This seems brilliant so far. I like how you've set it in Batman Begins :3 The writing is amazing too, it's the perfect balance; not too descriptive and not too lacking in description.

When I was reading the bit where she reads the brown envelope, I was sort of squinting at my phone, just like. "Jack? Jack... Napier...? JACK NAPIER OH GOD."

Yep. This is definitely not like any fanfiction I've read. :3

Oh no she's going to give him his scars isn't she? :o

Then he's going to freak out, put on some clown make-up and seek revenge.

Weird point, but I liked how you mentioned some of the details in Batman Begins. Like how Bruce traded his coat with a homeless person xD

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. This seems fantastic so far. Subscribed and Reccommended!