Your descriptions were beautiful. I could picture the setting perfectly. Winter's lethal glory, I could see it. The last paragraph really really packed a punch, and even my heart fell a little. "The forest gradually began to bury her, and I cried tears of despair as the trees loomed over with their crooked, icy fingers...desperately trying to comfort me". Just wow, it was simply astonishing.
December 13th, 2012 at 04:42am
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Yes, thanks :) I tried to depict frostbite the best way I knew how.