Kacper Grove - Comments

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This seems really good! I really like the layout. It's quite simple, yet still pretty. I didn't notice and major grammar or punctuation issues, which I'm impressed about. I have problems with that, i think everyone does. But I didn't notice too many in this. Update often, you could defiantly go take this somewhere. You seem like a really great writer! Keep doing it, you could go far! (:

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Yay! First comment! Now down to business, you have good characters but from what I can tell you might need to give a little more back story, unless you do plan on doing that later on. I think you can go places with this :)