Stranger - Comments

This was absolutely beautiful! I really loved it, the contrasting comparisons and everything else and the story and so many f e e l s. It was perfect, honestly.

I just wish it was true :(

Despite the lack of porn, I HAD ALL THE FEELS EVER and I wanted to cry just so much It was beautiful, baby

I really, really like the whole short sentence then a paragraph structure at the beginning. It just hooks so hard.

I giggled when I read brown tweed pants and a fedora just because Ryan

he doesn't know how he'd handle it if he didn't hug back. Aww. AWW. My heart. Just

I love the circumstance they're meeting under - the texting leading into the meeting. It makes so much sense for them and is just overall adorable. I mean I can feel all the awkward, but aww. Why is this so cute?

All the little descriptions really tie it together too. Ryan's fingers void of calluses. FROM NOT PLAYING GUITAR IN PANIC. OH GOD.

All Brendon's hurt is so ngf. I don't even have words okay?

And the last line. Totes adorbs

I love it so, so much. Thank you. I don't deserve your pretty words but I like that you spoil me (Though I will hold you to your porn promise.)

He looks so different. He looks so familiar.
That's so pretty. Ryan's pretty. It's all pretty.

Like Ryan's different but he's the same. I get it. I so get it.