December 26th, 2012 at 07:08pm
Prompt interpretation: Modern and metaphorical Throne
Originality: 8/10
Character Development: 5/10
Well that was a bit quick. It was cute and fluffy though. The blind date thing at the royal themed restaurant was cool, and the minor part about him being rich. But I think this could have been drawn out a bit more. The whole thing, just seemed kind of sudden.
I gave you a lower score for the character development, because of the 'I don't know why I felt the need to apologize to him' and no explaining.
And the end seemed like you just really wanted to finish it up instead of going into detail so you, filled it up with dialogue.
Anyway, it was a cute story.
Score: 13
Thanks!
I am still pretty new to writing and character development and rushed writing are things I really need to work on...
I'm glad you liked it a little bit though :)