Aw, this is such a cute story. And such a great song. Not to be mean or anything, but there are some mistakes in it. In the third sentence it says 'because his famous'. That 'his' should be 'he's'. And in the paragraph where Harlow has just opened the door, it says 'Or am I dream'. That 'dream' should be 'dreaming'. xox
Not to be mean or anything, but there are some mistakes in it. In the third sentence it says 'because his famous'. That 'his' should be 'he's'.
And in the paragraph where Harlow has just opened the door, it says 'Or am I dream'. That 'dream' should be 'dreaming'.
xox